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AAAWWW Diana is like her mother figure

I love this story so much!

Didn't it say in the game that Edgeworth "literally had to drag her away" because she wanted to stay in court?

I'll admit it - I'm really, really bad at reviewing, and therefore I'm more of a 'favorite' person. However, the sheer quality of this story was enough to make me go out of my regular habit.

First of all, I hate multichapter stories. I hate them. And yet, I was completely drawn into this one, and as soon as I started reading I couldn't stop. It didn't get boring, it didn't rely on about 80 trillion cliches, it took what facts we have from the series and brought them to life. While Franziska searched for closure in the story, I was waiting for her closure as well, and couldn't stop reading until she got it.

That said, I think you did a great job showing the more vulnerable side of Edgeworth as well. Edgeworth hasn't been shown to be very vulnerable, unless it was in relation to his father's death and/or his guilt over it; even in the conversation he had with Franziska at the end of JFA, he was hard to read. And yet in this story, you made him vulnerable while still making him believable.

For all these points I salute thee, but I still have one thing to add. Your characterization of Franziska herself was brilliant. You took the aspects I most like about her - her intensity, or sometimes, lack thereof - and showed whatever emotion you meant to portray. Because of this, I say I love this story.

As a final note, the German included in the story made it that much more authentic.

That really was a grand story! I'm amazed at the flow of tears you made me spill. I'm a bit disappointed through for not finding a more comforting end. I feel as if it lacks One or two last paragraphs.

Wow! You update rather quickly! That's fantastic, as is this story. I really enjoyed this story. Would you believe that it kind of makes me think about my life a little. It's very deep and sad at times but above all else it is enjoyable.

Now I'm going to read your other story!

Jenni:)

Congrats...first time I ever cried while reading a fanfic! This story ended perfectly, despite my want for more MilesXFranziska action. Good thing you ignored me! lol

I can't wait to read more from you!

YAY! Wonderful story as expected! I'm really sorry I didn't review the last two chapters; as I've said before I haven't had free access to the net lately, but that's all over now!

I really did enjoy this final chapter. It was beautifully-written and-once again-a bit of a tear-jerker. The suicide note was a wonderful idea, and the lingering mystery adds an element of realism to the story. Nothing ever ends perfectly, and it's always a wake-up call to Franziksa I'm sure.

Anyway, I look forward to more writings from you! I love your style and your ability to evaluate Franziska so well. She is a very complicated character, though they only scratch the surface in the games, or at least that's what I have to believe. You show her humanity without making unnecessary changes to her outward appearance, and it's wonderful.

Like I said, I loved this one and I'm looking forward to many more to come!

-Phoenix Tilea out...

great ending...I look forward towards the next chapter.

This was a great ending to my day to be able to read this.

I wonder why I got two notices for chapter 15...

Its been a pleasant read.

May your works continue to be perfect.

-noian

Great chapter...to bad I didn't get to review this earlier.

So things are starting to have closure..eh?

-noian

What a beautiful ending! T_T I love that last line, it finishes off this story so perfectly! Well done!

Me very much likey, my dear. So you're finally done. Now you can help me finish Passion for Fire! Since I'm stuck with this stupid writer's block. ARGH.

Congratulations on finishing what I consider to be your best stoyr yet. I'm not going to say that I hope to see more...because I WILL see more. No doubt.

Love you!

It was a wonderful story!

I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to review your other chapters, I kept falling behind, but this story was so well done. I loved the flashbacks and the behind the scenes events during and after the Matt Engarde trial. I also really liked that you used the similar, if not the same since I can't remember the lines, that occured within the game. I tip my hat to you, I truly enjoy your work. I can't wait for the third part of the perfection series.

On a sidenote, despite hating him, Matt Engarde had one of the best evil-turns I've ever seen. I mean, one second he was nice and dumb, and then he reveals his scars and ever grabs a random glass of brandy from nowhere! That was pretty awesome. Anyway, good luck with your writing!