I liked it. Nowadays doesn't care how much lemon you put off in M-rated stories. If you like, you can add your unrated version. I thought it wasn't graphic enough anyway.

I really love these two and the way you write them :) loved this

I don't think I can take the unrated version. this one's steamy enough

Oh my!it was lovely!

Unrated version?! This one was already so hot! I must read it! :D

Great story! Loved it especially that last call, was very funny lol.

So cute, nyaa!

ULTIMATE KUDOS! now thats done we need more of this couple theyre great and more should be done with them :(

Hilarious! And sexy. If you can, please email me the other version!

(I don't know if you're still on so I'll wait to see if you respond to this review to give you my email. :D)

Can't believe it took me over 4 years to find this. This was incredible, and there's more? I would greatly appreciate it if you would send me the "unrated" version, if you still have it, that is.

This is one of my favourite Urahara-Yoruichi stories - it really gets their playful, sexy sides and has a great sense of humour. Very hot indeed.

It's a really good story! Like how Tessai figured what they were doing. haha!

very good story the concept was however a bit...scattered, this story was filthier than it's predecessor but nonetheless excellent work,it certainly deserves praise, though at times it became scattered and unfocused...not to mention japanese featured too much in this story, nevertheless it was fun light and airy...worthy of 85% and you can still see me after class.

-hands kudos-

Here yah go :)

This was a great story, and I would very much like to read your unrated version xD

Thankyou

Love Rei xx

Amazing fic, both funny & sexy!