im really interested in the storyline. however there is just so many reflections in the past. and i feel like kagome is always trying to sing and in my opinion its annoying bcs i never seen her as the singing type. other than i really love the idea of the syndrome and will continue to read to see if i can get past that

Damn. I wish someone thought about me like this

This was a new approach towards Sesshoumaru and I really liked it. And Kagome was really nice written. And damn Bankotsu, I think he is one of my new favourites now

I can understand both sides of a you completes about the readers. First, I'm sure every descent person know that family come first. For the people that are mad about how the writer update. You should think about walking in the writer shoe. That you wouldn't enjoy complaints about how you update. I know that you would personally put your family first. And you shouldn't ask the writer to do any less.

I can understand the reader side, too. You can just get into a story so much you can't put it down. I feel that way about your stories. So I look forward to the updates. I want to camp out on you doorstep, waiting for it. But I try to be patient. I know this is your hobby. So reader just try to enjoy her talents. But don't push to hard . And if you do, be really nice about asking for update and then "wait", years if you must.

The writer is just sharing her wonderful stories. It her artwork and you have no right to ask an artist to change her work, with longer chapters or changed storylines. I know that I've said that I love your stories but some part isn't what I liked. But I didn't mean it the way it may have sounded. For example, sometimes Sesshomaru is a little more insure then I think is in his personally. I'm not asking you to change your storyline or what your writing. I just pointing it out, so you can look at that. If you think I'm right great, if you think I'm wronge great. To me it's your stories and need to do what is right for your stories. I still love them or I wouldn't be reading them for 12 years now. I'm just trying to help and show you how must I care about the stories. I think and hope other review's are doing the same thing. Maybe we reader just don't know how to say that. After all a lot of us are not writer, it's not mine talent. Then there are just jack ass that shouldn't be on the Internet and you should just smile and remember some people are mean. But just remember, you have people that love and wait for your updates.

Hopefully this made sense and didn't sound bad. You're patient reader.

Congratulations

Cute and sweet lemon. I like your story. Thanks for your writing.

Kagomes complete nonchalance to what’s happening around her is kind of annoying. She toes the line between in and out of character pretty frequently. Regardless, it’s a good story with an interesting plot line.

It’s a simple fix, Sesshomaru: just stop being such a dick.

This is an amazing story and I am glad that I reread it. I just wish there was more. It almost doesn't feel right that it is finished. I'm not ready for it to end.

Yayyy!

The plan's coming together (quite possibly literally ;)

I'm glad Inuyasha learned his lesson :)

Inuyasha has absolutely NO chill!

OMG, Inuyasha's reaction to Sess/Kag's "activities"! XD

Miroku certainly painted a vivid picture, didn't he? XD