this is great

u gonna continue this? i wan more -

Don't give up your story now! It's starting to get interesting. Many writers take months between updates. just write when you feeling like it and have fun doing it.

This is a great story please continue writing and post again soon.

Hi there,

Owule, please keep posting, this is a good story, great plot, don't worry about the lack of reviews, it's quality, not quantity. your plot is great, and apart from the odd spelling mistake, which we all make, it's easily readable. try vhanging your summary a bit, and see if the interest changes.

good luck, and keep going!

Regards,

Hikishi

Oh ... this is so cool! i wonder what is Relena's role here. Are Duo and Heero lovers? and who contributed the female DNA to this girl? wow ...

that was really good, and PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!

Thanks bye _

Daddy? who's the mother? Poor Duo! He will be so broken hearted!

Grate chapter! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.

Dude not cool how could you stop it there... Thats the mother of all cliffhangers. More soon please

Whoa. I didn't see it coming.

But you've sure got me curious now. Update again soon, please.

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!

Its interesting so far, just promise me you'll keep writing...