| Reviews for Love's Burden |
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Alley McNally chapter 1 . 12/5/2016 I am not sure why she is leaving, but hey! Whatever. The sex was good. that what is really matters in this story. I would have cut the rest out. Good story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2016 A great story I love it please make more |
DragonEyes1294 chapter 1 . 3/17/2016 Loved it, I think you should do a second part of what happens after |
Ellie Eugson chapter 1 . 1/31/2015 Epic nose bleed right now...like..."Me is typing on blood" nose bleed. Though the story is a little cliché. Especially the part when Sophie was about to leave Howl's room, and saying that she didn't want to be hurt by him any more. Instead of him stopping her, you could piss off the reader by something like this: "I froze, unsure of what to do. She was leaving, and my mind was screaming to stop her, to pull her back. But why isn't my body obeying? She took her dress, and slipped it back on, "Why...?" I asked. Silence. She was ignoring me. She walked towards the door, and gently turned the doorknob. She left the room, and turned back to flash me a meek smile, "I'm leaving tomorrow." And then the door closed with a light click." And then make if more epic so that they continue in a washroom at the train station (or something along the line). |
Demonfox212 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014 I loved it️ |
nyanyanyan chapter 1 . 4/18/2014 hoo-lyy shit that blew my mind! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2014 Wow...sexy! |
Hjj chapter 1 . 2/17/2014 Amazing yet sad |
RockGIRL666 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 Your stor is awesome i realy liked would be even better if it was good job :-) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 That...was amazing...so beautiful |
purplebookworm7 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 ooo that made me so horny! |
My Identity Stays Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/5/2013 OH My Lord! You're such an amazing and very detailed writer! I cried on the part when Sophie confessed she was going to leave and then Howl confessed and all... I bet a lot of people cried too! Wonderful Story! I'm looking forward to reading more stories from you :) |
iitzel chapter 1 . 8/8/2011 I enchant myself is very ... I do not have words but I enchant myself please you have but if. .jaja. .is but that you follow thus byeee.. by sierto Im Mexico so I hope that you understand to him |
God Wears Gucci chapter 1 . 2/5/2011 My goodness 3 This had to be one of the best lemons I have ever read. Thank you for making such a beautiful creation ;3 |
Lalikit chapter 1 . 10/27/2010 I'm like two years late, but whatever... :) You did an amazing job! Best Howl's lemon I've ever read! Congratulations! :) |