Good story

Very enticing, loved it

good story! YOU SHOULD do some more chapters, maybe Sakura realizing she too loves Naruto and it's dejavu all over again hehe, good work tho keep it up!

A very enjoyable read. The rhythm felt good and the characters felt right, plus this couple has really started to grow on me. Hope you keep writing other stories. Thanks for taking the time to type it up and upload it.

Love this

aw this is so cute. i love it. Naruto and Ino are so cute in this story you wrote. I love Choji's line about Ino actually doing something. Poor Naruto when Ino saw him like that. It was so sad but sweet when Naruto wanted to warn her

cool, sweet story

Cute. A little quick but thats what happens in one-shots. I always like young NaruIno stories. They are so cute together.

Structure wise, I'd say space out your paragraphs and sentences better. It's hard to read at points because all the words run together.

Other than that good job.

very cool )

This is amazing. Honestly, if I didn't know you in person I would've sworn you were some kind of novelist or something. A real professional job, and believable. So few believable NaruxIno fics out there, glad to find one this good. 1 night together, as themselves, and they fall in love. Really, beautiful story

Keep Writing!

NO please don't let this be a one-shot

I love the pairing Ino/Naruto.

That was awesome! 10/10

please write more oneshots! naruino is the best!

Very nice! You got the characters personalities down well, and used a creative way of getting Naruto and Ino together. And I love the ending, great job!

-It'd be cool if you make this more then a one-shot, but the way you ended it sounded...final. But it wouldn't be that hard to overcome.

-KatanaUser

great one shot!