Holy crap, you have a talent! I rarely review, but I couldn’t NOT review this one! Great job!

All done! I enjoyed the story. It was great apart from the weird spliced endings of those two chapters. Vegeta was so adorable in his feelings for Bulma. Loved the second epilogue with Future Trunks.

Chapter 23 also ends with a weird splice of the chapter after the GR blew up. Maybe these are intentional?

The end of Chapter 17 appears to have been spliced with part of an earlier chapter. Just an FYI.

this is the best anime fanfic ive read thank you for the amazing story , I found myself laughing at times the romance was also good ...off the charts :-)

I love this! Vegeta is so adorable! The whole thing is great. I love the way their relationship evolved. I think this is the way it happened. If they would have told that part: great job

I loved your story! Especially epilogue 2

ROFL! That was the best wedding scene I think I've ever read, involving B & V! And DEFINITELY IC...Lol! Thank you!

_ V

Love how you brought piccolo in.

I like the little smile! Yup, she thinks you're a looker!

Love that line about "Somewhere between amusing and annoying."
And I'm feeling the romance building here so subtly it's just perfect!

Great start! Grabbed my attention by staying in character and showing more than a bit of clever writing. Looking forward to this :)

Cool! Loved how Vegeta found her 'amusing' in her towel, Thank you for not going OOC by making him a perv. Awesome! And then the little nearly peaking then forcing himself not to peak thing was so cute!

Hilarious!

LOL