The world needs more Tryan, indeed. Perhaps it's your life's mission. :P

It was great. Very realistic, and I liked their relationship being 'give and take' as your Troy put it, as well as Ryan's insecurities being accepted.

That was fairly amusing.

And cheesy.

I liked it though.

Keep it up!

(Can't offer real analysis, my head is spinning)

Chonki

Damn you have got to make a longer Tryan story. Cause this one was HOT!

I loved it, that was a really good one-shot...great story!

Whoa. WHoa. WHOa. WHOA. HOLY EFFIN WHOA! XDXDXDXD Sorry, but seriously. This was one awesome guy talk. XDXD But like... the style that they... when they... Ryan in a... I mean... Wow. O.O XDXDXDXDXD That was amazing. And hilarious. And just, wow. That was... just... Augh! Please type more like this soon! XDXD . XD

Okay, i have read a lot of Tryan fics so you should feel very proud when i say that this is one of the best ones that i have ever had the pleasure to read! And the guy talk in the beginning was hilarious! I loved it and i can't wait to read more of your work!

Is this really guys talks about cause my shit ain't going for that...whatever.

Ohh...you're the infamous Jacob some of my fiction friends have been talking about...hmm...very intimidating.

So...this story which is a one shot,is actually creative...not on the story plot part cause it's quite typical but more on the dialogue part cause seriously,they sounded like a pack wolfs ready to just jump on some pussy...or dick...or maybe both...okay...ew!

Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give you a 4.2 out of 5.

So...hope you have fun...bye.

Aww cute. I liked that. I liked the image of Ryan in a Japanese school!Girl outfit!

ACK! i loveses it! tis so cute it, i read it in school! anywho! thank you for a cute yet true story. horny, horny men. .

hey just asking but are chad and the others thinking about turning gay so that they could get more...

and are you like gonna turn gay coz that would be ... i dont know ...AWESOME...!

oh and if you do who are you gonna pair them up with ...each other...?

Japanese schoolgirl fetish... interesting choice.

This is a well written story. Your quality of writing is top-notch, as i expected it would be from the review you left for me. I just had an issue with something. I feel a bit out of place criticising your grammar, and for all I know I could be wrong, but I just wanted to point something out.

“Ryan, just please tell me, what are you really angry about?” Ryan couldn’t bear to look at Troy. Light seemed to pour out of his gaze, his eyes glowing with so much affection and hurt confusion Ryan had to close his own eyes.

So, Troy is the one speaking that line. However, the narrative that follows it is from Ryan's point of view. It just seems a bit odd that they aren't seperated. Even if it isn't grammatically correct, I think it's easier to read if 'Ryan couldn't bear...' starts on a new line.

And I think Troy may have been a bit harsh on Ryan regarding the slut thing. I mean, Ryan seems like a pretty self-conscious guy, so I don't think it's fair that Troy's getting angry at Ryan for it.

And one last nitpicky detail. Even if guys do swear that much, we're talking about the squeaky clean East High gang. I don't think they'd say so much as 'crap' let alone any other cuss words. Still, that's a minor detail.

So, great job on this story. Once again, You have an amazing writing style. Everything flows very nicely. Your descriptions are excellent, and nothing in the story is repeated, so kudos for that.

Hope your trip is a good one. It sounds very interesting. I'll definitely have lots of Tryan stuff waiting for you when you get back, hopefully with some of my common errors fixed up.

Great stuff! And thanks for the review for It's Not You Anymore.

Hey man...

I was reading your reviews... haha... looks like everyone has that person who looks at their grammar... though yours seems more thorough... haha... and you got a bunch of non-Tryan readers in there... heck... non-HSM readers... you are making more fans to the fandom... yay! good job...

anyways... thnx for the props... i know i already sent my reply about this story when you asked me to read it... and just for the record... id like it known that i believe i was the first to read it... maybe... haha... at least i read it pre-post... (omg... oxymoron?) haha...

anyways... successful story i would say... i think you should write more Tryan... haha...

~tG

well, I have to admit when I first saw this I was a little, if not a lot, shocked. Not that people made Ryan gay... because I always thought so, but because Troy was turned gay as well. I also had some doubts as to if it would work. Yet after reading the story, I can say proudly that I really, really liked it and I'd love to see more from this pairing. Great job.

Loved the story, just like I told you in my PM, but I couldn't leave this unsaid:

The oxford comma: ", and." I'm of the school that the oxford comma is redundant because typically the comma replaces and/or, so putting the comma before and is like writing "and and." But both are commonly accepted.

You only spell out numbers below 10. It's common practice for any commonly used style guide (MLA, APA, Chicago, AP, etc.)

Ok first off i LOVED this story! you have a talent my friend and you should make a series stories based on this one! I know you cant see me but i am on my knees begging for a continuation! lol.