Aww, that was freaking awesome! I wish that happened D: :) great job!

yuss! go Sam the matchmaker! kinda...

That Teal'c is so sneaky. I do love a happy ending and this story didn't disappoint, but not without making us sweat a little bit over how things would turn out. But it was nice to see both of their insecurities and passions for each other show so clearly. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

I wasn't going to review this story because I felt it needed a bit of work. Most people aren't open to hearing that. But, I saw the reviews you got, and I thought I should maybe say something a bit more constructive.

First, DV story, thanks for writing one. It's the only way to get better.

Second, I liked what you did with this description, "She was vivacious, childlike and yet a hardened warrior, she was an enigma, made up of contrasts and pure energy."

That was really good.

Now this part where you have Vala manhandling privates and Daniel laughing it off was in the words of Vala Mal Doran, "Not good."

“She’s certainly got character” he responded to his friend as Vala sidled up to a second airmen having being rejected by the first, placing her hand firmly on his crotch. Daniel laughed.

No man in his 40's who has any self respect is going to admit loving a woman who acts like that (unless maybe he is some kind of entreprenuerial purveyor of women). Second, no self respecting vamp worth her salt would ever do that. And, Daniel would definitely not laugh it off.

The conversation you had between Sam and Daniel was therefore not realistic for a number of reasons including what I said above, but also maybe Sam would not be so blatant in her approach with Daniel (nor would Teal'c for that matter).

Next effort try writing your characters with a little more restraint and show us how you get them emotionally from point a to point b, through life altering events or some self reflection in the context that makes sense.

And, please take this as constructive critique and not a flame.

liked it, good job!

Great first story, you should definetly write more D/V.

Not bad for a first try. The thing at the beginning with the airmen was a bit out-of-character for the slightly-more-mature Vala of season ten, though.

:) Cleo

Really like the unending connection. And that Daniel was standing in the doorway overhearing Vala. Nice fic.

Loved it. The idea that a simple question by Teal'c could get Daniel to start thinking, and than Sam out right asking him the same thing was perfect.

Enjoyed the confrontation between Daniel and Vala. You hit it right on with their insecurities and the miscommunications that arise with it.

And of course the idea of Vala watching Farscape was amusing.