Thank you for not rushing the romance! Since they're only 13 I love that you're taking your time with developing Shizuka's place on the team first.

Wow. This was AMAZING. I LOVED it. :)

That was heavy exercise?

haha.. too lazy to login. XDD

this was such a sweet story! shizuka is such a nice person, although it must be frustrating when hand motions and mouthing words doesn't get the message across. Did that ever happen to her?

agh.. i really like reading shikamaruxOC. XD

aaawww! that was such a great ending! i love the whole story and i was taken on the emotional ride with Shizuka! good job and keep writing :)

This story is awesome, I love the way you write, but I really don't think that IPODS, cars, and music players belong in the Naruto world.

great story. Although, i think it shouldn't be ended there. You were on a roll.

great last two chaps love the story arigoto for finishing it it was awsome. good luck on ur other stories.

Oh, thank you! Geez, you read so far into my story. I didn't actually think you read it. :] And you did Shika so well, I'm sure Neji-kun is gonna rock!

. . . WHAT? It's OVER? NO!

WHERE'S THE HAPPILY EVER AFTER? WHERE'S THE DRAMA THEY HAVE TO FIGHT THROUGH! GR!

* after recollecting herself *

I really liked this story. . . it's over so fast? Ugh, I'm gonna miss Shizuka-chan so much. . . And there was barely any Shikamaru showing love. . . *cries*

Well, you might want to read my I'm No Princess story, 'cause it's the one I'm working on right now.

Thanks for the rockin' story, and make the next one about Neji, that'd rock!

Ah! It's over! Great story, great ending. I'll be checking out more of your stories, now!

Great chapter

My favortie part in that was Shikamaru saying that it was hard to miss Shizuka crying in a heap on the ground, that really is so like him.

Virginia, really? Cool. I didn't know there was one there. But, yeah, I definitely know there's one in Florida since I live only a few hours from it. Lol. And no problem, about me adding you to my communuty, glad it could make you feel special. XP. I like Shizuka. A mute shinobi is an interesting idea. Plus, she doesn't have to annoyingly scream out the name of all of her attacks and give away her position like everyone else does. ::rolls eyes::

Also, you've got a little bit of a problem with your italics. I know the 'edit' function sometimes messes mine up, so it's no big deal, but sometimes you've got the line before or after what Shizuka wrote in italics, too. It kinda makes it a little hard to understand what she's writing. It interrupts the flow. And some of your sentences are cut off, too. Like at the end of a pair of quotes when you write, "Shizuka wrote," or something, you've got it on a new line. Just thought I'd let you know!

Besides all that... cool chapter! I know see where the "Red Moon" in the title is coming in, ne? I was wondering about that... I have a feeling something with happen with her and Shika-kun there? Lol.

And now, I should go, since this review is getting ridiculously long...

another great chap love the story please update soon

Halo gurl, j'adore this story a' yours!

Just sayin', you might want to check out my I'm No Princess story, it's my favorite that I'm writing right now.

Lots O' Love, KittyLo!