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   poetif chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 8 years old and still just as good. |
| JETHROluvsTONY chapter 1 . 6/5/2012 Yeah! |
| Bonnjy chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 Raw, Powerful, Touching (actually gripping) Emotional Angst.. Start to Finish it grabbed me and held on all the way through. I keep finding more of your stories to read, and I have NEVER reviewed 1 writers work so often, but your literary efforts are SO worthy of the time and attention! |
| ShaNini86 chapter 1 . 11/25/2008 This is an amazing, emotional, and in character one shot. I love your long, free associative paragraphs and then your short, one-lined sentences. It's a great way to really point out a theme, as well as convey a character's conflicting emotions. I particularly love the following line: "Olivia had screamed because she wanted to live. Even without a damn thing to live for. That was the height of pathetic." Absolutely beautiful. |
| Shannon chapter 1 . 8/31/2008 Wow. That was amazing. The last two sentences especially: "She felt better to know it hadn't been a lie. She really did have too much to live for." |
| SarahKathryn chapter 1 . 6/22/2008 i like how you got into olivia's thoughts. very good! |
| sn855850 chapter 1 . 1/19/2008 Very insightful. Too bad they didn't put something like this in the show to really tantalize us with. I love it. |
| pinkydog123 chapter 1 . 1/18/2008 OMG! that was so good! if only that really happened _ |
| MakeMineADouble chapter 1 . 1/17/2008 That, was incredible. I think you captured Olivia brilliantly. You have such an amazing talent. It was so beautiful and so true. :) |
| mia66 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008 WOW! Love your point of view and how you revel Olivia's thoughts. The last scene was so emotional, it was so good. |
| Moriel21 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008 Wow, this was amazing! I loved how you had Liv totally empathize with Lauren like that...and her emotions, the way you wrote them were so strong and so real, that was brilliant! I loved that she finally let go at the end and finally after doing that realized that she had been right and she did have so much to live for! This was brilliantly written, sad, but so good too! I loved it! :D |
| mrslee chapter 1 . 1/16/2008 So, so beautiful. Why oh why, didn't the writers incorporate this? It would definitely have lifted the episode. Really well written, fabulous. Laura |
| KatieKat1690 chapter 1 . 1/15/2008 wow amazing! This was fantastic! Great job! |
| xXBlissfulCursesXx chapter 1 . 1/15/2008 Fabulous story! I loved it! D |
| Veiled Obsessions chapter 1 . 1/15/2008 Wonderfully written. You have a great style, and an even better vocabulary. Poignant, and a perfect one-shot for Signature. |
