when are you going to update. pleez update soon. pleez, pleez.

man i know that feeling, which is why this review is so late, so sorry

i hope you enjoy your laptop and that school gets a little easier for you

lol did mar'i seriously just get angered by a dull pencil? lol it sounds like how i used to be, but then i discovered the mechanical ones. hallelujah! mar'i needs to learn about them

to be continued? aw man

lol with the baby, jake has an easier access to mar'i. i wonder how well that will actually work for him

why would they even bet with their money? it belongs to both of them anyway so it really made no sense. hehe they could have bet material things or made the other do something silly instead

and dick loses! well he should be used to it

anime is pretty cool, but i prefer american comic books

plz update soon

keep it up

er... okay? i can see that the pencil thing is going somehwere... It looks like it has a lot of potential.

~waves, finally reading and reveiwing again...

please, please continue.

Could you expand a little more on the Raven-Beast Boy interactions? I love it when they tease and jibe at each other! Please!

Oh yeah and I love this part : a big mess at home created by her children "and/or the husband who has not yet come to realize that he is not, in fact, one of the children there." Makes it even sweeter that Raven decides to love him despite all his perpetual immaturity!

Cool idea to peer into the Titans' futures! Haha! Dick Grayson, so much for the 'boy wonder' he's supposed to be...being so easily 'defeated' by the young ones!

good job so far. keep it up.

Really? By me? Oh god! I feel so special right now, anyway. great chapter (with the sharp-pencil obsession you know I'm on it too) so poor Richard he'll have to pay 400 dollars, I still can't understand WHY he made the bet-I mean-since the baby is inside the mom-usually she knows what it'll be, anyway great great chapter,

Update soon,

Franshes

So it's a girl, huh? And Jake should still watch out...Dick will still be as obsessive as ever.:D

The pencil thing...I so agree with you! I used to be so obsessed and got so frustrated I switched to mecanical pencils. Nice and sharp all the time.:)

LOL! That sounds just like Mar'i, wanting the pencil pointed to the peck of sharpness. Poor Jake, it's about time he gets a break. But knowing Richard, he'll probably find a way to keep an eye out for him, even while he's busy with the new baby. Just a guess. Great work, please update soon! (

LOL! Go Kori!

Well...your story is so good, so poor Jake he got "attacked" by the branch and he's also being tortured by Nightwing, that's so evil of him, Raven should do something about him one of these days, after all it's HER son he's traumatizing( I think I spelled that wrong srry.)

Anyway update soon,

Cheers,

Franshes

pain with a friend named james? cool lol i went to a party with my friends

THANK YOU SEREAPHINA for making her update!

lol mar'i has that boy wrapped around her finger

OMG did that really happen to your friend? lol my pity is with him, lol ok not really but that is too hilarious. nothing is better than real life

oh well i missed the 100 reviewer mark but i still reviewed

keep it up

Ahahahaha!

Oh, man! That was great! Poor Jake, with everyone laughing at him like that. I'll bet even the six-year-olds did.

-shakes head-

Hope you and Phina have fun at the zoo.

Hearts and Spades,

IamtotallyKewlio

Oh ho, poor, poor Jake(and your friend James)...I feel sorry for you!(After I've had my share of laughs that is)..lol