Great story, very well done. Now do you have a last chapter to tell us if everything went okay with the turning? This is just hanging here now.

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it and man it was suspseful. I am always looking for a story when Coraline comes after Beth. Man I can keep on going and going. The way you describe how Coraline wanted Mick so badly and how Beth was right all along and how Mich finally realize his true feelings. This is one of the greatest Moonlight story I have read. It is also perfectly detail. I love the details very much. While I am reading it, I can picture it in my mind. The way each person have their own individual realistic emotion. I love it very much. GOSH! I don't know but this is this crazy.

I also like the part when you it looks like you are there at the scene like a ghost summing up the whole thing right before your eyes. I really enjoyed that and plus you can also say that this enteraining. Love it:P I know you probably realize this now but I really can have crazy thoughts but typing all of this. Plus, I let you know that I only write long reviews to my favorite story. I just can't get over the great suspense you put on this story. Its great.

Thank you for a great story:P Hope you enjoyed my CRAZII review. Hhahahah

Great story - keep it up!

This was an excellent story! I really enjoyed your writing style. It's rare that fanfiction authors put in the time and effort to create vivid, detailed imagery.

It was a disappointment that things weren't extended beyond where you left it, but that *is* a good stopping point for a shorter story.

Anyway, keep up the good writing. Thanks for sharing.

Wow...this is excellent. So well written. Mick's emotion in the last chapter really got to me. Can't wait to read more.

Wow, that was intense, realy intense, but in a good way. Are you going to do a sequel?

so is that the end?

From what I could tell, she was held in a room in the basement not the attic... I don't know if that is part of your AU thing or not