OK. Cute. I must say I like it - it's made me smile as I write this comment.

Pretty big compliment, that.

I particularly love "But I don't think I could have it any other way. Sadly" - that is soooo Kyon. Good job nailing that.

Thanks

Heh, cute. She totally would respond like this.

xD This is totally what she'd do. I loved it, good work!

The amazing thing about this short story is how i did not catch that Kyon was proposing to Haruhi initially but it gradually becomes clear and when i finally go:

"Oh. Oh my God that is so cool"

Well, let's just say by then this story has already captured by utmost attention. Awesome effort.

That's hilarious. And Cute. And quite true to the series.

:D this is EXACTLY how I'd imagine Kyon proposing to Haruhi would look like! :) good job!

It's funny & also kawaii!

XD Megas kawaii, loved it. Aalways in the mood for some good Haru/Kyon _

Short, and to the point. An excellent piece of work.

this was great. thanks for the work.

Doesn't really sound like Kyon but you know what? I don't care because I'm in the mood for some cute. Yep, thanks!

That was... surprisingly good. Correction: that was very good. You certainly portrayed Haruhi and Kyon like they were in the light novels and anime. In other words... you're a pretty good writer. And I don't give out that distinction very easily.

Aw. That was cute. I was fairly certain that it was about a ring when she mentioned the brightness along with the size.

Just obnoxious enough to be Haruhi. Nice.

Very cute. I'd only point out that you're probably missing something here: "But she didn’t have talking about the ring like that". "To go on", maybe?

Otherwise though, very nice. Welcome to the fandom.

Nice.

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That line:

"But she didn’t talking about the ring like that."

needs fix.

"I barely have time to react when she proceeds to hug me around the middle."

"around the middle." sounds strange. Maybe you should put "." after "to hug me." ?