No,no,no! I happened to have liked the ending! VERY cute, and VERY well written!

Sooo cute! It passes the whole sunny FUN atmosphere of a summer day spent with friends. I liked it, very much so. I just couldn't stop smiling. Congrats!

That was great!Man I can so see Chouji doing a cannon will be so sweet to be in.

umm y did u have it there twice u know wht i dont care it was funny the first time and so i read it the second time and sure enough it was still funny and i LOVED THE ENDING its so like hinata

awsome it is soo cute ok u so need to make more with a better ending no affence

wow i cant believe u thought that was bad! It was so cute! especially wen naruto kissed her cheek, not her lips. it showed tht he liked her, but wasnt like "OH I MUST HAV U!"

i loved it!

It was a good story, but you played it twice. I love the story.

I thought it was cute and clever.

I like the second ending where Naruto's pants were off...that was funny!