This is such a good series!

What a wonderful feel of what KND is about, it feels like an actual episode came out of this chapter :)

I'm very happy you are still updating this story. I like it very much. Please do continue. This chapter was entertaining, especially with Numbuh 4.

Woah nally! This is my favorite chapter so far! I felt like I was actually watching the episode. I really really really REALLY loved the dialog. Numbuh 4 was so funny. I used to skip to that Cinderella song when I was little! Everything about this chapter was perfect. I can't wait for you to update.

End of the beginning. I'm guessing that all the past chapters were basically setting the stage for what's to come? Wow, it sure is weird to see the whole 'Numbuh 1 is actually Numbuh 1.1' :D

This just gets better and better! I'm looking SO forward to the next chap!

Yay! An update! And a fast-paced, action packed one at that! Aw, I felt bad for Nigel during the briefing. :( You have all the characters so IC, I can actually see this fanfic play in my head like an episode. It's perfect!

Loved the banter between Cree and Hoagie. Oh, and Gabriel and Mark conflict was intense. o.o

Awesome chapter, and I can't wait for the next one so I hope you can update asap! :)

~Symone

This story just won't end. That's a great thing. My spidey senses are tingling. Don't forget to write more.

good story

Yay, an update! Poor, Nigel. I feel so bad for him. For a second, when I was reading in the beginning as they were playing football, I thought you were still referring to Mark as Mark vise versa with Nigel as Numbuh 1. Numbuh 1.1? Nigel needs a hug. :(

I liked the part when Gabriel said that he and Cree never expected to betray the Kids Next Door back when they were Operatives. I'm really curious as to how you're going to finish up the plot line with that previous plot twist, so I hope you can update soon! (Um, I know this is really random especially since I like Maurice/Cree, but can I become the first ever Gabe/Cree shipper? Please?)

~Symone

Oh dear, everybody is having some emotional trouble, aren't they? I have no idea what will happen next, so I guess I'll have to find out, won't I? _

Oh goody! You updated! I'm so happy. This was a good chapter. I'm curious about what the teenagers are up to. No good I bet. And poor Nigel. It is kind of weird that the Code Module would make the decisions in the KND without Rachel being able to overcome it. Really weird. This just gets better and better. Update soon!

aw sniff sniff he cried

im not a big fan of nigel so im wouldnt be as moved as if wally was crying or something, but this chapter is real good! :) keep writing

Oh. my. gosh. I feel so sorry for Nigel. And I have to admit, at the beginning with the football game, I forgot and really thought that it was Numbuh 1. :(

I'm guessing this is sort of a filler chapter. Action will come soon..right?

Another really good chapter. I could' have sworn it was almost done, but it seems like it's only the beginning. I can't wait for more.