I sincerely enjoyed this book, no matter how sadistic that previous statement just sounded.

Shit, maybe Spot?

Yes Stress, I enjoyed it. You're right, there aren't fics like this out there and for a pretty simple reason; no one can write it. While reading it, I can feel how it was vague, yet understandable. And for once, someone didn't' kill off Sarah out of spite. ;)

Emotions came out very nicely in this fic and since my emotions are already clouded by this overcast day, it made the story even stronger.

Great job Stress; you've done it again.

Ugh, I can't even imagine being able to write like that. You have such an amazing talent. I hope you know that. It was a stunning story, just amazing. Excelent job. :):)

~Jordyn~

Oh, wow. You have quite a way of writing stories like this. Very... emotional. Excelent.

~Jordyn~

I realy liked it. It seems to me that this type of writing can;t be forced. a stry comes until it stops. but I would love to read more. I'm sorry it's done. I realy enjoyed. I hope it helped you. I also really liked that line- it started with a cough and it ended with a death, and now the story is done.- if I were you I'd put it in. I especially liked the Spot-Race chapter.

That was amazing. You are very very good at writing.

Wow, this is just awe-inspiring.

I love how you wrote Racetrack and Spot's - well, all of the character's chapters. I thought Spot's chapter was great in the way you described Spot's power - very real, concise, and poetic in the wording. The way you described Les' smile and tears really got to me. I could really visualize it. I was thinking, "He's so brave and selfless and strong," and it made the ending so much harder to accept. Great last words... The last imagery was so tragically beautiful.

Amazing.

I really liked it nice job :)

Well done.

WHAT IS RACETRACK DOING?

*falls out of seat*

dumb.

Wow. Just. Wow!

This is really heartfelt and dramatic, and you can feel each character's pain as each chapter unfolds. I can't wait to read more!

That was awesome. I don't know how you do it. Each story you write has a distinct tone and voice that fits the story, it's amazing.

Poor Davey! The burden he must be carrying... And Les! What an interesting take on Les' character/development. Jack, he's really gone? Forever? How will that effect everyone? I wonder how David is going to turn out with his new start...

I love the symmetry here, how the chapter began and ended in the same manner. It's poetry, I say.

Very powerfully written.

You know, you never replied to the emails I sent you.

Very decent, thank you for posting.