this seems like almost the perfect prelude to an awesome destruction of konoha story...must say, it was short but sweet, i liked it

You know you story 'Tears in the Wind?' Do you think you can write more chapters for it. I liked the first two and I want to read more. So please update on it. You got lots of reviews for it. So please update on 'Tears in the Wind' and soon.

Scary! Well written. Keep 'em coming. Deanna

Great One-shot although this certainly has ALOT of potential to be a great multi-chapter story.

this could very well turn into a very promising story if you can not only write long chapters but suspencefully as well.