This was really haunting...
Very brave of you to write something disturbing like that in egoperspective!
An enormous accomplishment; I could feel Stockholm Syndrom and the beginning of madness twist her mind around.
Brilliant.

This is Stockholm Syndrome at its finest. Great... now I can't look at Fathis without thinking there's some pretty girl lock beneath his tower. But then I could almost pity him, since he seems like the lonely type with that sad sigh of him.

Love your writing, so fluid, I envy and at awe by it. I think this will be a good example of writing I can look back into. I love first perspective writing, because when executed properly, it can be impressive. And it's in present tense! Which makes it more impressive and immersive.
The chapters are short but it is satisfactory, something I struggle with in my own fics.

Your character development and story pacing is also good, real good. Yeah, this is definitely going to my favorite list. T'is good example on writing.

This kind of dark story is the exact type I love to read, it is imaginative and crazy and unreasonable... I can imagine something like that happening when one madman breaks a woman's sanity in such a way... you've done an amazing job writing this!

The human mind is an amazing thing. Imaginative, Vivid, intelligent...and so easy to break, upon which it can be rebuilt to the architects desire. Amazing insight and well written. Well done!

-UA

This is amazingly, hauntingly twisted yet kind of perfect. Reminds me of Stockholm Syndrome in fact...

... Wow.

This is... good, to say the least. Love it.

That was so much fun to read!

Ohmygoodness. That was really scary, and so twisted.

I LOVED IT. XD

Disturbing, very good but disturbing.

I decided to finally get into this one.

Great so far! I especially love the bit about the moons. :3

It's definitely an interesting take on the Thieves' Guild. Adroitly executed - eerie, and well-narrated, but not crossing the line to downright disturbing. Thumbs way up.

very very good i absoluetely loved it nice 1

Excellent! Reminds me of Hannibal, or that transvestite from Silence of the Lambs. Very disturbing. I get the feeling that the title character was... losing it a bit at the end. Only one thing I didn't get, where was the Gray Fox? I missed the reference. Or maybe it's just that I haven't played Oblivion since like October due to getting a PS3

who are you!... this is the absolute best fic i have ever read... they should have people like you working for bethesda.

I am honestly in awe of this story. This is perhaps the best thing I have read, fanfiction or otherwise. But I feel unworthy of saying anything else; besides, so many other people have said the same sort of thing, and I wouldn't want my review to be redundant. Also, even with my expansive vocabulary, I don't think I have the words to praise this in the excruciating detail I would like. So I will reiterate: Absolutely fantastic. If you ever write anything like this again, I will die of happiness and amazement reading it. Spectacular.