| Reviews for Underage |
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   Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 7/8/2015 Ha! XD You go Mai! Happy Birthday! |
| YunaNara chapter 1 . 1/28/2015 LOVED IT WOW OMG AWESOME |
| TheUnquietDead chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 Ah the walk of shamelessness. :D Love it! |
| MaiyeolVonBielefeld chapter 1 . 9/5/2014 I loved it! I love the LinxMai fanfictions...it would be amazing if you made a oneshot or multiple chapter sequel to this about when mai does get pregnant... |
| AvidandImpressed chapter 1 . 4/6/2014 This was brilliant! So well written, It really exceeded my expectations by miles. It was tasteful and loving and you are an amazing writer. |
| melodyann75 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012 simply love it smiles u are an amazing writer:) |
| WellITriedSoManyOptions chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 The thought of stoic Lunch doing the walk of shame- giggle. |
| LadyGrelka chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 I liked it. I was glad to find a Lin/Mai story, there are few out there, and when I say few I really mean few. Its a bit sad that there are not more 'Ghost Hunt' fanfictions out there. It really was a good anime but it seems that not a lot of people have watched it or maybe not a lot of fanfiction writers. Well I am off to try to dig up more 'Ghost Hunt' stories with me luck. |
| AesEa chapter 1 . 11/7/2010 sigh...sweet..ermmm..not the lemon (lemons are sour ;D) ..the story..:3 |
| coldqueen chapter 1 . 6/28/2009 Utterly delicious story! I love the slow build-up to the consummation. It makes it all the more sweet. |
| jo107 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009 Kyaa! I like it although it's very long. It took me almost an hour to finish reading it. Haha _ |
| drawnfromashes chapter 1 . 11/17/2008 Whew, I'll say you did a decent job of it. *fans self* Naru's a handsome thing but Lin, my oh my. |
| Bandelero-Casanova chapter 1 . 10/12/2008 Super awesome! It was a great fic and I'm impressed by the lemon, even though it was your first real shot at it. It was detailed enough to be good, though I would have liked a little more "lead up" to the main event... ahem... okay, maybe I'm just a perve when it comes to anything Lin related haha. XD I look forward to reading the next fic! Sweet Dreams, right? Cool. Well I hope you write more LinMai, the pairing is so adorable and you write them wonderfully! |
| Cip chapter 1 . 9/25/2008 Overall a great story! engaging, and full of just the right amount of mushyness to make me all giggly :D just one tiny pointer on the lemon. It was very well written, but since it was Mai's first time it would have been quite painful for her to start with. However, it flowed really nicely and probably better wihout that, so just a little heads up for the future :D |
| invisibledictator chapter 1 . 8/25/2008 o! ive gotten to love LinXmia...and this story was so cute! please write more! it was soo good! |
