| Reviews for Tainted Black |
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   J Luc Pitard chapter 12 . 12/1/2011 Really enjoyed this story. I like the way it fits before Advent Children. Cloud's growing illness and the mental strain of Jenova/Sephiroth/reunion is written out very well here. |
| ZeldaStrife chapter 12 . 8/30/2011 Great ending, a perfect lead-in to Advent Children! |
| ZeldaStrife chapter 9 . 8/30/2011 Love this. I love this story so much. I thoroughly enjoy your writing style and word choice. I loved the intimacy you created between Cloud and Tifa in that last scene. Loved it! |
| karen chapter 12 . 6/17/2011 i love it |
| Kaitlin A. Blagg chapter 12 . 3/25/2011 Awwwwh, this is so cute! I love how you wrote this and it is pre-movie and all that stuff. It's totally awesome and I love it[: |
| WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010 Wow, your writing-style is amazing! It really fits the characters and the place they're at now. It's really good for your first story. There are a few typos here and there, but nothing too serious. |
| rikku247 chapter 12 . 9/6/2009 Simply amazing. You write so beautifully and descriptively. I really enjoyed reading this. -rikku247 |
| Mr. Lau chapter 3 . 8/26/2009 Gah! I've never read a fanfic that has made me want to cry! And i'm only on the 3rd chapter! Keep it up! *sniffle* Chap 3 is so heartbreaking... |
| Awkward Avocado chapter 12 . 8/18/2009 omg is that the end? it was so cute love this story! Amazing job! |
| Vladimir the Hamster chapter 8 . 8/16/2009 I had some cereal at 3 am the other day... Sometimes breakfast is extra super-duper early. Marlene is adorable. xD Chocolate chip pancakes for everyone! |
| Vladimir the Hamster chapter 5 . 8/16/2009 I'm sorry, but the "blue optics" thing really annoys me for some reason. As does Cloud and his whole "Everything's my fault" attitude, but that's just Cloud being Cloud. XP Story's good, though, or I wouldn't still be reading. I liked the interaction with the other bartender. Go knock some sense into him yeah! |
| Vladimir the Hamster chapter 1 . 8/16/2009 Hrm, first thing I noticed is that it feels like you're shoving a lot of words in that don't necessarily fit the situation. Optics, cranium... also "visage on her face" is redundant. "The male stood" is kinda weird in this context. Vocabulary words are fine and dandy, and the story is perfectly understandable, but it's more how you use them then which ones you use. Not saying you can't use them, but I feel like they don't flow very well here. That said, I thought you did capture Cloud and Tifa's feelings very well, and the characterization is great. :) and on another note... bras are mad uncomfortable to be wearing to sleep. XP Maybe someone like Tifa needs them. hur... |
| ZakuReno chapter 12 . 8/16/2009 It's the end? I just hope you can make a sequel or some sort of it. |
| Aeriths-Rain chapter 12 . 8/16/2009 aw yay! happy ending great story, welld one |
| Tifa berlinghof chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 oh clouds in trouble now! making tifa worry to much, thats not a good thing! |
