Well this review is rather late considering the story has been completed a while ago. It's pretty good I like the plot although I feel the conversation between the characters could be a bit more mature, especially between Jiraiya and Tsunade considering they're older. Nice story though!

I actually liked this, grammer was pretty good and I liked it. Very realistic

thank you for writing it

This was an awsome story!

AWESOME CHAPPIE! ~ i got an excuse to get on my laptop btw, so yayy!

That was great epilogue:)

It could have gone into more deep thought and detail, and probably more compound sentences would do; but that doesn't really matter, does it? I was hoping it would make me cry a bit.. but I'm sorry to say that wasn't the case.

ON TO THE POSITIVE SIDE...

It was sweet, but shouldn't Tsunade be standing and him kneeling? xD (Or maybe I just sped through it...)

Anyways, it was good, sweet, sappy, (the kind of sap I love :D), and I swear, you are the most talented 6th grader I know. xDD

(This is what you get for making me your beta reader. xD)

Aww the ending was so cute :) I loved it Very good story!

“NO! Tobi is a good boy!” He said.

“Oh just shut up!” Zetsu said.

BEST LINES EVER!

I'd love an epilogue.

~shinomori kyo

AN EPILOGUE SOUNDS AWESOME! wow... u made killing tobi and zetsu so much easier than what masashi is making it seem like! why cant he just do what u just did? lmao!

homg ;~; I loved it.

I could tell you rushed, but all the more, I loved it.

MAKE AN EPILOGUE D

Yes, yes and yes! I want an epilogue!

Yay! Nice chappie! D

Of course you should make epologue! Btw great chapter:D

aw...great chapter. Poor Tsunade. It's really rare to see her being the injured one. It's usually Jiraiya, so that was a good twist. For the epilouge maybe you should just make a little fluffy moment between the two of them. If I think of something more. I'll email you.