You probably won't even see this considering how long ago this was posted. But this is pretty beautiful, it kind of hurt to read until the end but I am glad I did. Thank you.

i cried anyways i cry at everything just because they have happy endings. I like the way you wrote it :)

Very sweet :)

aww! that's really sweet! job well donr :)

good and thoughtful too

That was good, i love the harry potter quote you stuck in there, yes i caught it, im such a nerd

ohh! perfect ending there. i like that whole 'dont pity the dead' thing. amazing story! i want to read more, and expect more reviews from me

loved it! and it was so happy!

That was really good. Keep it up!

This was so good! Why didn't i realize i didn't put this in my favorites! Now i will though! Keep writing, Phlawere2 :)

so sweet ,I'm crying wa!

Aw! This is awesome.

its really good.

but, flashbacks are usually in italics or seperated from the rest of the story by the pretty line.

but it was good!

Talks to herself: Deep breath, Strange. But this is sad Carol. I know, but its a story. But its sad. I said I know Strange! You're a big meanie! Yes I know, Now can we got on with the review, Strange? Oh right, Carol.

*Review*

Strange: Beautiful! This is so sad and cute! Nicey!

Carol: Very well written. Nice Quote too. I'll quote Strange, "Nicey!"

~Strange(Dont forget Carol!)

I loved it. Very touching. Nice use of the quote too.

:)

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