Serena is better than Misty

Ooo. Wonder what is there in Cerulean Cave. Sounds exciting.
Paul's going to track Dawn very soon. XD. That'll be interesting.

Looks like now there's gonna be action in the story. I guess the man is Giovanni, right? I love it.

Ash is too busy to visit Misty. :( So sad.

Rudy-Moody is such an a**! I'm gonna kill him for playing with Misty's feelings.
Aww at last Misty starts crushing on Ash! How cute!
Poor Paulie can't find his phone. Tch. Tch. Wonder how he is going to react when he cones to know that Dawn has it. XD
At last Cilan has arrived. Ash's plan (whatever it is) is going smoothly, I guess.
Ash sure is a strong trainer.

Hoping Ash would return soon!

Poor Drew for being in the position he is in right now!
Poor Misty for feeling so lonely!
Poor Ash for not knowing what to say!
Poor Paul 'cause his Electrive is dying!
This chapter was so sad.

Good. Now its clear that Rudy-Moody (my nickname for that bastard) does NOT love Misty at all. Ash is leaving and Misty is going to talk to him. Just hope Misty soon remembers the past and we finally come to know what actually happened between those two.

Didn't see Drew in this chapter. Wish him best of luck for me.
P.S. Longest review I have written!

Great story! I absolutely love it. Wonder when Cilan is going to arrive.

they run a gym not the country

'Elliot' is gonna get it :P

who is that?

So is Misty in love with Paul? By the way, thanks for bringing Charizard in!

Rudy is stupid LOL;)

is it team rocket?