Reviews for Master of my fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WHOA! Great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. |
![]() ![]() this storys amazing please write more up soon cause i really wanna read more of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story. Confused about the ending though. Was that Kartik's dream or something, or was that really happening? |
![]() ![]() this is truly excellent. it is sumptuously written, befitting the victorian setting of the book. it makes you read slowly and savor each word, but doesn't go by too quickly. i sound like a book critic, but i think you have a serious honest to god talent for fiction. all those metaphors are beautiful and illustrative. you actually write in the voices of the characters, but add your own touch, and you should be proud. wa wa wee wa. mad props. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i love this story! you're a wonderful writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, eerie. I like this a great deal, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I should like to kiss you for this. My goodness, you're writing takes my breath away! You made Kartik sound even hotter than he already is, and- bleieve me when I tell you- I hardly thought that even possible! I'd ask you to marry me, but 'm already going to marry this fiction. Ah-mazing! Your Faithful Servant, Midsummer'sQueen |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this fanfic! I just finished reading the whole trilogy and I am really sad that it is over. I have come before to , but for Twilight (which also rocks!) and the Percy Jackson series. This fanfic is one of the best I have read. PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really like it. Is Cecilia a dream? I'm a little confused as to what she's doing in the boat house, or if she's a dream/halucination or something... But otherwise I love it! I love Kartik so his POV is fun to read! It's very good, I hope you update soon! -Maggie |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it! im a little confused about the ending tho is he still dreaming or is it really happening? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is AMAZING...you write beautifull! i kno i've only read the 1st chapter, but still, it's amazing what you do! keep it up D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i LOVE this. please, please, please update as soon as you can. this story is wonderful! i cannot wait to see how you portray him in future chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such an amazing story...and I love your chapter! I love the way you write Kartik's POV! I really cant wait for there to be more Kartik and Gemma moments...love those so much :) OKAY well i hope you update as soon as you can until next time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this is amazing. i feel like im actually reading something by libba bray! lol |