Very good

Hey u should continue this cuz this is really awesome ! It cracked me up big time lol it was sweet too... ichiruki4ever yay !

Can you put slight hitsuKarin too? A little bit more like ichigo knows about his crush and decided to duel toushiro who ran away? That'll be awesome

This is awesome , I like the hints of hitsuKarin... When are you going to update? PM me or something

Where the hell is the rest of this fic?

I wanna know how this ends!

I go through reading all this, only to find it isn't yet finished, and hasn't been update in years!

You can't leave things like this!

PLEASE!

I would pick rukia. I mean only if you love them alot. I would like to be with my family but sometimes you gotta grow up. So i would pick Your lover. You can stil visit your family its not like your gone from them forever, Sooner or later your gonna see them!

Edward I well lets just say I've been desensetised to the whole Werewolf thing Look at the tag hint hint respond if you want I'll answer almost anything

very very good story! hoping for a update soon

0.0 I don't know who's gonna die a more painful death; Ichigo or Renji

[“Why do you have to come?” I questioned already flash stepping away from Renji and Tatsuki.

“Because you’ll get hot headed again and tear down half the city.” Her arms wrapped around my neck while I held her legs firmly to my sides. If I wasn’t so focused on figuring out why Ishida was in such a panic I would have been really flustered and red.

“I do it once…and you think I’m going to do it every time…” I mumbled to myself acting like a five year old that had just been scolded.]

*cough*He did it more than once*cough*

[“I raise you from an infant and you treat you loving daddy like trash. Masaki!”

oh no, please tell me he doesn’t have a picture with him

To my displeasure, sure enough he did.]

I unconsciously read the second line aloud o.O

[As if a sign, a blue arrow shot through our room; missing my head by centimeters actually fringing my hair.

What do you know, I just died and some unknown force is already going for round two. Fate’s not on my side.

“I’m gonna kill that Quincy. I swear I am.” I barked at the wall before tuning to walk towards the large gaping hole the shot came from.]

That reminds me in the second Bleach movie with Ishida saying 'I don't do such errors... not often' lol xD

[“Sir, we have Ryoka.” The shinigami’s voice began to shake after that. “ it’s Ichigo Kurosaki…again.”

Moans of aggravation swept through the area. If I had to guess they were probably annoyed at the fact that they had to fight my son all over again, but this time it would be that much harder.]

Ichigo is more often a Ryoka than guest xD

[“What will happen now that he can use this power?” It looked as if he didn’t want to ask.

“Well, for one thing hope he’s on your side…which goes hand in hand with saying you should probably let his dad-”

“And his mentor.” Urahara had to add his say.

“Go.” We both finished together.]

LOL

Whah!

Onto next Chappy!

[We sat in silence for about thirty seconds before both of us busted out laughing. “Wow, I almost believed that whole mushy final hour stuff.”]

Typical!

[“Remember when I got you that hat?” I asked like an old man reminiscing with an old buddy over black coffee at a retirement home. Oh…my…god…I…am…getting…old?]

Bwhahahaha xD

[“Do we know what we’re getting into?” A blond haired, anorexic lieutenant asked, fidgeting nervously. “I mean, it took about six months to fix all the damage dealt. Not to mention the execution grounds are still unstable.” I was so proud I could cry. My son really caused them a hard time.]

Bwhahahaha... and nice description of Kira, respect XD

[“I say we let him know! I want a rematch with Ichigo!” Kenpachi (Yes, this face I knew) screamed with excitement. I didn’t know how I felt about him battling my son, he was awfully violent and rarely loses. “This time he’ll definitely lose!” There goes my pride, it just sprung to the size of a skyscraper.]

I love those situations and his thoughts xD

OMG, how Isshin made Mayuri shut up was priceless! That screams for a Shinigami CUP!