An effectively eerie and fine piece, with just enough exploration of John Doe's sickening, dark but also intriguing mind palace. Good job.

Ooh well done. Excellent character study.
(i know this story is so old but Seven is an old fave movie of mine!)

exeptionaly well writen story

Oh, this is awesome! I am not so fond of this movie, but I like the way you explore the thoughts and feelings of this guy!

Oh! This was really good. A creepy movie and a creepy fic, but in the entirely good way.

Best line: 'Wrath was standing at my door.'

Brilliant! I really enjoyed this. Very well written, a credit to your name. Well done!