Dear Lord Percy, what did you do? And God, why'd you go SWIMMING OF ALL THINGS?! *falls over laughing and giggling like Marguerite*

And the Serpentine is?

So what happened?

I'm sure you've been asked this question plenty, but...

What exactly DID happen?

You're a great writer, able to add the correct humor without making the Marguerite, Percy, and Andrew out of character. Good job, and keep writing.

-Vendetta

One of the funniest, most hysterical things I have read in a really long time. I really, really, really, really, really want to know what actually happened! Please tell us!

That was quite entertaining, and I simply must add my voice to those others who are begging to know what really happened!

Oh my heavens! Hahahaha! Dear, dear Percy - and faithful Andrew too. You really ought to write up the rest of this now, I'm terribly curious what really happened? *snicker snicker*

Random and funny. I love it!

So um are we ever going to find out what really happened?

Because this story is absolutely brilliant and I'm just dying to know what our dear Percy was up to!

*you are a brilliant writer!*

Ahaha, this is AWESOME! Please, please continue!

Please do continue this, and soon! You have the language down, and the story summary made me literally laugh out loud. And now I am very, very curious as to what Percy was up to on the banks of the Serpentine . . .

Nice first chapter. I liked the interaction btwn Percy, Andrew and Marguerite. And of course, I'm still very curious as to what really happened with Percy. Update soon please!

So? What did really happen?

LOLLOL! GOOD GAD! hahahaha! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT! hahaha Good show! I just got through reading the book for the third time and was hoping to find something post-book to make up for the very ubrupt ending. This is even better that what I was expecting. Wonderful! Keep up the good work! I can't wait till the update!

Which obviously begs the question, what did really happen? This was a delightful read. Thanks