Great story. I loved to read it!

i loved this story. Sweet.

Beautiful.

This is an excellent written and really

beautiful story.

Wow! Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!

I absolutely adore this story! I like how Mac first has to have excuses to come to her house:

After the first night, he offered to bring her ice cream after they spent all day running dead ends on a case, the next night, he drove her home and they made tea. After about a week, he gave up all pretense of going back to his own place. Now when he walked in, there was a blanket and a pillow waiting on the armrest.

I also like that Mac has to face the truth after what Andrew did to both him and Stella:

Tonight, it was different, tonight he was different; he had stared down the barrel of gun, not for his country or for the honor of the city, but for sins of his past that he could never fix. And she had almost died... because of him, because how he felt about her, because of how he needed her. They both knew, they knew it was coming long before tonight, and if he was honest, he could figure that Peyton knew too, and that was more than part of the reason why she stayed in London. But to have Andy lay it so plainly in front of their faces, so boldly without ever saying the words. To flirt with her, to ask her out, to use her to get to him, because it so clearly affected him... well it was obvious the time for pretense had past.

Thank you so much for this beautiful, wonderful story! I am so glad that you wrote it!

Wow! You just made my day! Your story touched me to tears, I can't even tell how much I loved reading it! You really know how to use the right words, you're so talented!

Please write more fics, I just know for sure I will love them :)

best wishes,

Saoirse

That was a beautifully written fic exploring the changing relationship between Mac and Stella. Wonderful piece of writing.

Nice work. I like your way of writing the characters. Please keep on writing smacked storys.

I love it! really!

this is a oneshot right? or are you gonna make it a total chapter story?

Wow. Awesome, captivating writing. I haven't seen the episodes with the stalker but your explanation to Andy is very logical. And the song fits perfectly :)

I just watched the episode and I think this fic was the perfect ending to the 3 scenario - Smacked style, that is. Awesome!

That - was beautiful. I don't even know what to say beyond that. The writing was beautiful, the descriptions of their emotions was amazing, the way you wrote Mac's thoughts was very in character and the overall idea of the story was excellent. Thank you for sharing.

You've hit it out of the park once more, EC. I love following his thoughts in realization of what he has in her. This is so very well done...

how sweet ! very nice... great story. thanks