Reviews for Everything You Can Never Be
Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 37 . 7/18/2014
poor poor Matt

You don't make deals with Devils...

especially with a man the can scare the shit out of Old Scratch himself
Ashley Brooks chapter 39 . 8/20/2013
WOW! sorry I've haven't reviewed any of the story but I got so Interested in it! You almost made me cry when u said Trish was consoling Ashley!
LucifersSin chapter 47 . 5/20/2013
My dear, that is the most heart-wrenching, thrilling, bone-chilling, heart-breaking, romantic story that I have read starring the third generation superstar who I so unconditionally adore to point maxima. I can't-I don't know what else to say besides "That was one hell of a job well done". Keep it up.
- BlackHeartsandChaos
TheSilentArtist2225 chapter 46 . 4/26/2013
I think my heart broke into so many little pieces when the undertaker finally let go of Stephanie... D,: I feel so sorry for her .
see-me-clearly chapter 47 . 3/4/2013
I just aww! I'm so mad that it took me this long to find out that you updated but what ever it was so worth it. God this chapter really hit home, gosh I'm just so damn speechless I don't even know what to say. I got this heavy feeling on my chest now because of how emotional those last few sentences were. I'm really and truly happy that I came across this story I can't wait for your next fic.

As always,
Love Clare
Ashtyn Cena-Orton chapter 47 . 2/11/2013
Loved the ending. Sad to see that this story is over.
Guest chapter 47 . 2/10/2013
You have a true gift my dear. This is honestly the most well written story that I've read. It takes a lot for me to cry when reading something and believe me, I've cried a lot while reading this amazing story. When I read your first chapter, I wasn't so sure if this would be a knockout, but as the chapters started increasing I knew I was wrong. You took me on such on an emotional journey. It felt like I was with Randy and Ashley. I also want to commend you on using a pairing that was unexpected and you made it work. I honestly can't believe it's over. It seems like just yesterday I first started reading it. I remember going onto fanfiction everyday to see if you had updated. When you didn't, I wanted to cry. When you did, I dropped whatever was doing and immersed myself into that chapter. So I want to say thank you. Thank you being an amazing writer, thank you for making me cry because of the sadness that all the characters had gone through, thank you for making me want to kill Candice and Matt, but most importantly, thank you for giving Ashley and Randy the happiness that they deserve.
CheetahxRabbit99 chapter 47 . 2/10/2013
*Sniff* *Sniff* I just need a moment... *Sniff*
Okay so now that I'm done crying at the beauty of this chapter, let's move along.
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I can't believe this just happened. It feels like yesterday when I saw the very first chapters. And now we're at the end. It came so quickly.
Why didn't Randy realize this sooner? They were perfect for each other from Day 1. This was so worth it.
I love this story, this chapter, and especially you. _"
N'aww the ending. So flipping ADORABLE!
You're one of my favorite authors on FF. I wish you good luck in all your other fictions. 3
xoxo- Ashley
BigRedMachineUK chapter 47 . 2/10/2013
Wow. It's over. I'm so sad.

This was an incredible journey. An emotional, psychological one. So many things happened in this that I can't actually pinpoint which one was my favorite moment. All I can say is I enjoyed every single chapter. Thank you for this, dear. It was fabulous.

-Ada-
deletedaccount47 chapter 47 . 2/9/2013
Great ending!
Shandy777 chapter 47 . 2/9/2013
So, I remember finding this story and reading it on summer, spending hours, days reading about twenty-some chapters, never leaving my computer unless I had to eat, sleep, and do other human necessities. I don't know why I started reading this story, to be honest with you. I have never liked Randy with Ashley. My OTP for Randy has always been Candice Michelle. I suppose it had something to do with the fact that Randy was feuding with The Undertaker, and I just utterly adored how brilliant and entertaining that feud was. So when I realized that this story would revolve around that, as well as a relationship, I told myself that I would just suck it up and read, to see what would come of it.
Four years later, like you, I cannot believe that this story is finally over, that is has finally reached the end. I'm sitting here trying to figure out what I'm supposed to do now, because wow. It's actually over! This story has been an emotional roller-coaster. I cannot tell you how many times I wanted to either kill someone or simply cry and mope around until something good happened. I wanted to kill Ashley for being so freaking stubborn and strong, Matt for being so freaking annoying and ugh, I wanted him to die. I wanted to kick Randy's hot butt for being so full of angst. And honestly, Randy's angst is what totally sold the story for me when I first started reading, as horrible as that sounds. I'm a sucker for the Randy angst. This story had it and made me all crazy inside.
It truly is amazing, though, and I just love how you were able to just captivate and enthrall the readers into this story. Oh several occasions, I know I was having a mini-seizure in my chair because I reached the end of a chapter that felt me screaming and totally cussing you out (in a loving way!) for leaving us to wait in such a suspenseful way. You are truly one of the most brilliant writers I have ever had the privilege of finding and I adore talking to you and reading your brilliance. I cannot wait to get an update from you for "Where Forever Dies." What is that story in the works, though? ... Is that the Randy/Melina story? OMG. We need to talk more about possible Randy/Melina scenes, because that needs to happen!
LOVE YOU SO MUCH. YOU'RE PHENOMENAL!
punkabanas chapter 47 . 2/9/2013
Wow, I can't believe this is goodbye :( the last few updates seemed so fast and so great that you'd never expect the end to come so fast. But it did. I wanted to thank you, this story will always be my favourite to read. No matter what. Thank you for keeping this pairing alive and never failing to make me smile over them. You know when I discovered this story, once I read what you had posted I'd always go back and re read. Waiting on that lucky update, making sure I wouldn't miss anything :'). My favourite parts to read were so many. But the last three chapters, plus the usual Ashley to the rescue parts or just any rashley sexual encounters :') you gave them such beautiful interaction.

It all came to an end, where all the pain and suffering was gone. Where she could open her eyes and see the bright lights, to be held in peace and be surrounded by loved ones. She's been through hell and back and that's going to make her stronger in the future; not only for herself but for randy as well.

I was ready to virtually hit you when Trish went all like "randy left" but you saved yourself. He showed up :') I just wanted to be Ashley and just have all that love from him. That's what real love is. I just wanted to be Ashley. His quotes, I hope they're stuck to the point where they have to fight on the bed over who gets the left and right side, or who loves each other more. Or those cute couple-things :')

I really hope you never stop writing Rashley. You are truly a gifted author and you've taught me so much, as well as inspired me. Thank you.

This is Michelle signing out.
xo
SimplyxApril chapter 47 . 2/9/2013
That was a perfect ending to a perfect story
see-me-clearly chapter 46 . 1/25/2013
What...the fuck...STEPHANIE! Are you serious bro? After all this shit she puts herself through with this man she tells him to get lost! What, she can't deal with the darker version of him but when he lets go she cries cause she lonely? Fucking hell man! She made me want to cry too! I wanted them to be happy even if that meant that they were to have a kinda creepy relationship, the important thing would be that they're happy...oh well lol. At least Ash and Randy get the happy ending. I'm proud of Randy for being strong enough to be the bigger man, he wouldn't stoop to Marks level. Go Randy!

Now for Matty...well nothing really to say about him the guy seriously crapped up. He lost 3 girls in 1 story lol how does that even happen?! LMAO any who I really enjoyed your magically creative brain, every chapter was like a suspenseful mini adventure. Although there's one chapter left I just wanted to say I really loved reviewing for you, it was fun reading your story and I'm kind of sad that its basically over. But hey when ever your next story comes out I'll be right there to give your these crack pot reviews and we'll start another fun adventure. Thanks for all your hard work.

-Love Clare :3
heather mae chapter 46 . 1/23/2013
I really liked this story
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