| Reviews for All Right Now |
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the wrong company chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 Wonderful! |
Contained Within A Box chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 This was fantastic. Oh wow. I loved it! Awwww, Jack, Bobby does love you! LMAO The last few lines. Very in character! |
juniper294 chapter 1 . 4/27/2010 so cute! I was smiling by the end! |
Beccatdemon13 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010 Jeez, I'm so sorry. This is one of my favorite Four Brothers story and I never reviewed it. *blushes* Anyway, I think the characterization is amazing and I love the way Jack and Bobby interacted. |
Kathrynjean chapter 1 . 3/27/2010 ahh! i love it! why did you stop? please just write one more chapter? I'll be soo happy if ya do;) |
A Kiss Before Dying chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 Wow! I really enjoyed reading this. The dialogue was great, very humorous, and you really seemed to tap into the characters' personalities. I hope you continue to work on this, it has a lot of potential. Again, great start! |
Alli Copen chapter 1 . 7/14/2008 I love how Bobby comes to the rescue and him and Jack have a heart-to-heart! Lot's of teasing and brotherly love! :) Definably a favorite. |
RockChick2012 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008 oh i loved this story. i wish that there was more stories when jack was a teenager they seem so much better |
xocrazililkelox chapter 1 . 6/23/2008 I enjoyed this story.I hope to see more from you soon.) |
Marjon chapter 1 . 5/29/2008 I really love the story! Keep on going with this good stuff, you really wrote it down in a great way! :) |
BlowFish chapter 1 . 5/25/2008 Aw I love it! That was AWESOME! I'm adding it to my favorites lol. |
xcloudx chapter 1 . 5/5/2008 Fucking amazing! |
the bean25 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008 That was really good. I enjoyed the part when he was talking about being on the second floor. |
CaptainSammish chapter 1 . 2/25/2008 I absolutely adore the dialogue in this story. - “You weren’t acting like an asshole,” Bobby said. He let go of him, ruffling his hair back into it’s disheveled state. It was starting to deflate a little. “You were acting like a bitch.” “Oh, fuck off. I should have called Jerry.” “Jerry? He would have ratted on you to Ma so fast.” Bobby put the car in gear, and pulled out of the parking lot. “You’re not going to tell her?” “Are you kidding? Of course I am. And I’m gonna tell her you got arrested because you were too busy trying to figure out what to do with a girl. It’s not all that different with than with boys Jackie. You just get to be on the top for once.” - That's fabulous! The whole story is very well-written, neat, and witty, and it flows flawlessly. Favouriting this! |
CherKeats chapter 1 . 2/15/2008 LOVED IT! Excellent. |