Um, unless it's deliberate, you might get more reviews if you enabled the anonymous reviewer.

As for this story, it's cute. I like how you didn't say right away who Leo and Raph were after. LOL

My only question is why Donnie had to be restrained. I can understand Mike, since he probably would make the most noise. But, Donnie? Unless his tap tap tap of the keyboard was driving Master Splinter nuts.

Anyway, cute fic.

Be blessed,

Rene'

Lol, poor Mikey and Don! Cute story!

*blink* buahahahahahaha XD

Nice one.

Ahahaha what a good way to get some peace and quiet! I must wonder though, what were Don and Mikey doing that was disrupting Splinter's quiet time?

Longer, and more descriptive.

You don't have to speak in short, choppy sentences either. That's just a common technique to throw people off. The idea is to be concise and forthright without sacrificing your adjectives.

This doesn't have much of a plotline, or any other elements that might interest people. Suggestions are to either flesh out the combat scenes with over-the-top, pulp fiction (genre, not movie) style sequences (make sure to include copious amounts of gore and creative killing moves) or to include some hot steamy turtle sex.

Have fun!