You predicted Corona before it even happened..20 chapters as well. 2020...you psychic or something

Ok. THAT was a good one. Everyone seemed in character, the story was full of action, emotion, and had just enough fun to make it hard to stop reading. As for your Kaiba concerns...You PINNED HIM. Your absolutely right. Kaiba's not too mean, but not too nice ether. He's just hard to read for most people. Iv studied his character extensively for reasons of my own though, and you've pinned him PERFECTLY. Yes, he probably WOULD feel guilty if he destroyed stuff uncontrollably. And yes, he sometimes ignores Joey's remarks and just acts cool. especially after a long adventure like that. I noticed Yugi and Yami weren't put back together. If that don't happen, those guys got ALLOT of work ahead of them. lol! Like finding him a place to stay. lol! Sad to say, but I hope Bakura comes back. HE'S the final foe these guys have to face to get back some lost memories after all! lol! Anyway, your REAL good at this and I hope you keep makeing amazeing stories.

You have a couple of holes in the plot
No. 1: Yugi and Yami are separated into two bodies
No. 2: There are now two Millennium puzzles

which makes me wonder...
Could this fanfic will have a continuation?
because it would be ¡Awesome!

Well, I don't really know about Yami's theory. Mokuba was majorly affected by the Millennium Eye and yet he is a zombie. I think it may have been something else.

You did a good job, i was being to wonder when i would see the end to this story.

...I have just ONE question for you, good sir/ma'am.

..."What happened to Yami Bakura?"

:P

I'm relieved everything turned out okay in the end. For one moment I was worried Yugi might not make it. Trust him to risk his own life to save everyone else.
Just two little things I was left wondering at the end:
What happened to Thief King Bakura? Did he go back into the ring or was he destroyed?
Also, Yami didn't go back to normal and return to the puzzle at the end! Does that mean he gained a body of his own?

ooooo! plot twist! i love it! please update soon! again. haha :D

i knew you'd come back! thanks for updating. this chapter was really good.

Still reading your stories. Happy to see you still updating and hope to see more updates from you very soon!

Is there going to be an 18th chapter to this? :D

Chao- Yes! Looks like the Crown can continue to cause the whole gang problems!

Yugi- Hey! I was nearly finished here! Can't I get some sympathy?

YChao- Nope.

Chao- Glad to see an update! It was a good chapter even though you may want to go back to add or delete spaces. Looks like there's still plenty ahead for Yugi and everyone else. Will the next chapter be about the other guys back in Domino? Can't wait to see what more awaits these guys! Update soon!

I loved it and I'm pretty sure that clank was the crown maybe ANYWAY... Plz continue

love the story so far, can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

Ooooh, in a way it's like a cliffy. ;)

Great chapter! I'm really curious as to why the people weren't there either. Weird. :/

Update soon!

Kairi