Please have more ColinxMary and not one-sided. I want to know what happens next!

ROFL i can imagine Colin screaming like a little girl XD oh my, bad Colin XD

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That is briliantly hilarious. It's absolutly wonderful.

haha love it xDD

woa ths is very good stuff i like it i think first he ran in the Bathroom and she scream than get out or something but this is better he is peeking on his cousin i like it

help.

aw that was soo cute _ i really think colin deserves to have his day sometimes. So... does mary like him back?

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Normally I don't use 'smilies' but that sums up what I think about this story rather nicely.

Hokay so this could really be a great story. Its already pretty good as it is,but can I offer you some pointers? You've mispelled Mary "Marry" a good many times. Okay if want to change it,then you need to stay consistent. And when you go dotdotdot,you need to leave a new space for the next sentence. Like so : The kitty crossed the road... Lah lah lah. See? I would see about doing a spell and grammar check,perhaps even finding a beta. I really just wanna help you like all the other fellow ff-ers have. Good luck! This would be pretty funny,so make more stories!