this is a really interesting story, but the ending seemed rushed. you had some of chibi-chibi, but you just had a simple restore the time for cosmos and no battle, it is a bit of a let down.

Good update. Can't wait for the finale.

Nice work. I see you are keeping with the anime version. I always thought it was strange that in the anime Seyia, Taiki and Yaten were turned into men while in civilian form and female in senshi form. In the manga they were like Haruka and were women dressing as men.

i abouslety love this story bplrase update soon.

Wow, really great stuff there, I really enjoyed reading it because it kept me hooked by all this interesting new sequence of events. It's so cool and I can hardly wait for your to write some more so I can continue reading in captivation. Keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

More action coming out way!

Wow, this is really cool, but also very sad. Keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

When all else fails, go back in time! When the chapter said Usagi had Chibi-Usa's time key, I kind of figured that was where the story was heading. But what point in time will Usagi be sent back to? It'd be interesting if she was sent back too far.

I can't wait to read the resolution to this story. Great job so far. Update again soon(though I know how it feels to have too much schoolwork, been suffering that lately too).

ooh i really like it ;D

Cant wait till next chapter

xoxo

I am a man of few words. Okay thats a lie. This story is awesome, well written, agonisingly addictive plot and twists which can leave you either cheering or near crying. Nice 1st Story, nice debue in fanfiction and keep it comin!

Peace

More please.

Not good.

I really like how this story is going. If Luna, Artemis, and Mamoru were shocked it is going to kill Usagi.

Sweet. I really like this story.

Awesome start. Can't wait to read more. Please continue this story.