I agree with most of the other reviews. This is a rather simple, yet solid and realistic continuation. It would be a shame to say the last if this story was left as it is now. Despite that... I'm really impressed! You did a great job on that one!

Should have been more than a one-shot!

Honestly this caught me by surprise.

I could see this happening. Hope someone picks it up.

I love this story any chance you will do a sequel and make it a epic story.

Incredibly awesome idea.

Wish you wrote a full story based on this. I mean, Shirou in Camelot? Anyone who knows the tales of king Arthur (Queen Arthuria?) and likes FSN would probably worship you if you accomplished this. I would. So many ideas! Quest for the Holy Grail, but not to save it but to destroy it, Green Knight, the whole Morderd thing, just so many ideas! Heck, maybe he came into the story before she left, so she doesn't know him yet (well, sorta weird idea but her gasp could be him knowing her real name, her consideration could just be the consideration she would give to any incredible warrior who wishes to join her etc etc. I know that this only has the slightest thread of logic, but it would go some way to providing a plot for a longer story...)

Subing to you just in case you do write a continuation.

HR

Interesting...A good premise, and well-executed. I will agree that it was a tad short, but the big problem I had with it was that it held out so many tantalizing threads that were begging to be explored. :P

And here I was thinking I had an original idea...granted, it's not exactly the same but still...

Overall, though it was more of a drabble than a story, I liked it. Good job.

I adore this story! Could you please write more chapters for it?

I... could see this happening.

Continue this please

:-)

Good story and well written as far as I can tell. It was a little short but give me a quality short story over a mediocre long story and day.

I would like to ask a couple of questions but the next bit may contain spoilers so:

SPOILER WARNING!

First I would like to ask has Shirou become Archer in this fic? I don't know why but when I read this I imagined Shirou to have his Archer appearance but still retain what is mostly his old frame of mind.

This second one is less of a question and more of a suggestion. Perhaps you could write a sequel in which Shirou, knowing of the misfortune that will befall Arturia will try to help her avoid it. This is of course if she does not already know because at the end I got the distinct impression she recognised him.

Sorry, I have talked too much.

Escalus

nice, very nice. Now if only you could expand on this, either by continuing the story or by telling it from Saber's point of view.

I can see this actually happening. It'd be the most awesome thing ever.

its quite ok... just that its kind of short... way too short :P. Otherwise, it was quite a compelling short story :)

very nice