I bet Severus would loathe him now.. how cruel can you be Tom? you cursed him with another hated life. this is sad..

seriously.. voldy, he wanted death. what are you thinking making him immortal? it's sad

no holding back indeed

I get this feeling Madeline will go with Sirius?

messed up. but he is indeed messed up.

hmm I wonder why you name it dark archangel? the 'dark' part is unnecessary in my opinion. since at the begining you said magic is not dark nor white, but both. the name 'dark' made them sounds inclined to one side.
well I was just wondering, don't mind me.

I hope someone can teach him somehow.. it's sad, but it's his choice I guess

I hope Neville will meet and get helped by harry sigh

I know it's a characterization, but it's sad to not trust anyone..

Anyone else wanting to get into this: THIS IS A BL FANFIC. REPEAT: THE MC IS GAY FOR SOMEONE 50 YEARS OLDER THAN HIM. I would’ve liked a warning but I’ll at least warn others

Well...as full of cringe this damn story was...I'm too much of a whore for Dark!Harry x Tom/Voldemort fanfics to stop reading.

Anyways, I liked it...enough. Though I do suggest getting a BetaReader... and giving this story a heavy dose of editing...

Fantastic story love the world you created alongside the hp one it melds perfectly together!

loving it so far.
ps, those lyrics are awesome. did you write them?

holy shit your story is crazy as fI'm not a 100% sure of the definition of a psychopath but your version of Harry sure as hell comes close. I can understand revenge, I can understand the pain, I can understand the desire to hurt back... but I think this takes it a bit too far... anyway, still a good story, thank you for sharing!

Would have been a great story if it wasn't for all the anime, plus way too much music. An okay story I guess.