Lovely story great job

Three doors down:worshipable

nice job this is a good story

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

I love the story, thank you so much for writing it.

keep up the good work on your story

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Thank you for such a nice story!

I loved it! Really. Truely. And I'd leave a longer review, but I'll save that for the sequel, I saw it up.

Sess x Kag 4ever!

great story

pleasepleasepleaseplease finish the story! ok.. normally i'm an Inu fan *coughcough* srry been a fan of his for years lol. But this is the first sesshy, *gasp* . now youve got me calling him that LOL! , ehem story that i find i like, so pleasse dont finish it there.

DarkAnubisAngel

O_O awe you left it so open! where's the next story? :D

thanks for answering my question. yanno for plot holes you didn't have any but that one i pointed out. this was a very well written story. the ways to fix that are to fix the loose ends in the sequel or go back and re-do the first chapter. I often go back and re-read my full story if its been a while since i worked on it. it helps a lot and makes sure that i don't go over board and overstep on something i already wrote. :D great job!

- r0o

that was wonderful. :D i really do love it when authors make kags assertive! this flowed well, if your interested in a chapter between the epilogue and this one, i would say it would be Kags going after the elders of the wolf tribe in a political kinda way.

hear me out here, Hakaku and Ginta always called Kags Sister, meaning she was part of their tribe as she killed the prince wouldn't that make her the leader? and what abotu Ayame?

i would say if you did it, their should be a meeting where the wolves are deciding, who they should make the new Prince of the wolves when Kags and Sess show up, Kags is in spirit mode, and speaking to them cold and aloof like Sess, her mate at this point, does. She informs them that its her right as the new princess to choose an heir or successor because she doesn't want the post, they have no say even if she is human. Ayame wants to challenge her, so she can kill her for killing Kouga, but Kags flares her power out and asks her if she wants to live for her people or die for someone who wasn't worth it. i dunno from there, but she should set both Hakaku and Ginta as the new princes. -nods- but hen again you dont hafta. _

okay yeah then there's 2 things that still need to be adress:

1."Chapter one: A death of a heart./staring… at the blank page before you/A woman in a flowing dress. A spotlight shone down on her as she sang her song./open up the dirty window… let the sun illuminate the worst that you cannot find…/She was beautiful. Hair as white as a summer orchid,/reaching… for something in the distance… so close you can almost taste it…/Her dress as black as a cloudy night sky,/release your innovations… feel the rain on your skin…no one else can feel it for you…/Her song suddenly stopped./“Why,” she asked, “why have you stopped me?”/“This Shessoumaru has done no such thing.”/She tuned and glared at him. As her ice blue eyes burned into him, he felt as if he were melting…/“You will.”"- this you addressed as far as her hair turning white. but nothing else. why was she glaring at him?

and 2. Inu and Kikyo are still out there. and Inu killed everyone.

this r0o thinks you may have a bit longer to go :D unless your planning on slitting the story.

wat was yur favorite part of the story

there should be another story to this for later in their lives

Sweet ending, I'll look forward to the epilogue.