| Reviews for Breaking the Boundaries |
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lossthestand chapter 12 . 11/30/2019 Okay I'm done this fiction is shit absolute shit waste of time really |
JManM chapter 20 . 6/21/2019 I enjoyed reading this. The large cast of POV characters was juggled well. I rarely felt like skipping parts. |
nessiesmith2012 chapter 3 . 5/23/2019 Wait you made the fox a female? Its a male! Urg i hate when ppl make the fox a female usually because ur going to have some sick romance or maternal feelings. Like a male doesnt have protective feelings therefore he must become a she. |
nessiesmith2012 chapter 2 . 5/23/2019 ... Naruto is gonna trust someone because they know something? Horrid thought process kid. If your going to make naruto aware of the cruelty and a bit jaded he can flip the coin and trust in a hot minute. Makes it seem forced and fake. |
Brandon Boodoo chapter 3 . 3/22/2019 Contrary to popular belief NE isn't mindless drones... Contrary to what you think THEY ARE! |
Caincrux chapter 20 . 12/23/2018 MEh, it all went in shambles when things started heating up. Man it is so disappointing that after all that 17 chapters of training and crap Bleach never played any important part. |
Caincrux chapter 12 . 12/22/2018 this angst coming from everyone is starting to get so annoying. |
Caincrux chapter 9 . 12/22/2018 wow, this is what that other crappy sealcheat mobster wannabe fic should have been. |
Caincrux chapter 7 . 12/22/2018 im liking your style more and more. it may have been a tad bit on the naive side but the events are more fleshed out than canon. |
Caincrux chapter 6 . 12/22/2018 ive always wondered why the fuck cant ninjas flare their chakra when fighting infiltrators? hell just one a rank jutsu should have alarmed anyone. |
Caincrux chapter 5 . 12/21/2018 Sometimes I really liked reading about Danzo. There is just an appealing factor about decisiveness and the violence that follows it. Fuck Sandaime, a bloodline holder was almost kidnapped and she was the heiress to boot! |
Caincrux chapter 4 . 12/21/2018 Dollars? I never thought that Elemental Nations was in America, they're too Asian. |
Caincrux chapter 2 . 12/21/2018 Ehhh, I was expecting Zangetsu. bummer |
ZhaWarudo chapter 5 . 11/16/2018 Katsu means victory, it's just something Deidara likes to say, it's in no way necessarry to say to activate explosive notes... Telling us in advance what will happen(Hinata having to do something with Naruto) is just bad writting. Other than that it's decent though somewhat simplistic, especially in dialogues of the big wigs. |
Monster King chapter 20 . 11/13/2018 Great job I hope you have not given up on iy |