Love it. :)

Oliver has a Scottish accent not Irish. It is sexy though.

Oliver has a Scottish accent not Irish. It's still sexy though.

love it

Good story but a few too many spelling errors for my taste, Oliver is SCOTTISH and you need to work on dialogue. Sorry for the criticism, but it's constructive.

Lov it

hey buddy. i know this fic is old but i figured i'd still review. i think your story line is pretty good and your smut is realllllyyy sexxy but there were loadss of spelling mistakes and gramatical errors alll over the place. i'm sure youre wayyy better now though :D

really hott fic dude. keep it up ;)

not bad at all, just a few things.

it's Content not contempt, that's not something you want to be after a blowjob.

and you used no instead of know, in the last sentence. that's all i saw at first glance cause i was busy reading the story. just for future reference.

but good job.

Great work! i'm a huge sean biggerstaff fan! he's a sex god in my opinion lol! have read the other's but i thought it was best to Review the first one. hope you continue to write more about oliver and harry!

Um, usually, I hate this couple, but you made me LOVE it!

I feel like I should point out that Sean Biggerstaff (the actor who plays Wood) and I'm almost positive the character himself, is Scottish. Not Irish. As my Scottish roommate would undoubtedly tell you, there is a huge difference.

I think I vaguely remember Rowling mentioning Wood as a Scot, in book one. But failing that I usually go on the actor, and Biggerstaff is definitely a Scotsman.

:D

Aimee this story was really good, it was so cute at the start and the end, they would really make a good couple, shame huh?, anyways it was good for a first story, not much yaoi, but they can get to that later, and I know that they probably will.

That was really good. It was a little sad when I thought they couldn't be together, but it's all right now. Thanks!

Very hot! I like it!