Ok lol. Wtf. This is like... the world as viewed through fickle 13 year old eyes. Tho you probably could have upped the authenticity if jasper and Bella had got together by him passing her a note saying

Yr kute. Do u wanna get wit me?
️ Yes
️ No

Thanks man. I needed that laugh.

EMMETT IS FUNNY I GET WHY YOU LIKE HIM LOL

I HATE YOU EDWARD! YOU'RE SUCH A JACK-ASS, JERK AND AN ASSHOLE! NOT ONLY THAT BUT YOU'RE SOOO ALWAYS HAVE TO BE SELF-RIGHT AT EVERYTHING! DON'T BOTHER RUINING PEOPLE 'S LIVES! WHY DON'T YOU GO HAVING SEX WITH JEALOUS LITTLE MISS " I'M SOO INNOCENT " PIXIE WHORE ?! GOSH ! IF THIS WAS REAL, I SWEAR I WILL KILL YOU SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY! AND THAT ALSO INCLUDES TINY HYPERACTIVE PIXIE ! YOU 2 ARE SOOOO DEAD!

Thanks for sharing.

What the fuck is wrong with you make a decision and fucking stick to it

Wow hoe selfish can they be. Did Edward not think Bella would just as fustrated. I hope foe Bella/Jasper pairing.

wow I loved the whole story

not mam its ma'am

Did Aro create an immortal child?

JasperxBella

Cliffhangers ha i love em they make me feel all excited to see whats gonna happen next

This was relle good. I'm just confused abt a couple of things. Wat happened to Alice's jake? And if bella was a vampire then how can she still sleep?

I love jasper he is so hotttttt! I wish i could be his girlfriend because i would be better than alice know what i mean lol. I wish i could be Alice in the movie.

This is, like, THE BEST Jasper & Bella fanfic I ever read! You did a gret job!

I love everything up to this page and pass