great story but I hope you come back update and complete this Naruto and Tayuya's relationship has barely started with first moment interrupted

He is awesome! His bad luck when it comes to girls plus his plan to ship Naruto and Tayuya together by being an eternal third wheel is perfect! And I know it's been like sooo long since you updated but can you plz write more?

NOOOOO deuterium is an isotope of hydrogen, not a whole new substance. Easy mistake to make tho :P

more !

its ok . put some rape

hey love the story. It pulls u in and they start to get together in realistic circumstances rather than just some half hearted attempt then going into "Icha Icha" like topics. For that i am greatful.

What an interesting fic. Hope you update.

Ugg. I hope you update this someday, it's rare I find a story with an OC that I dont think is total crap.

I want Hideo to LIVE! And I also want for Tayuya to have a hard time of it for a while. Cripple him, or put him in a coma, but I want to see him shouting at Tayuya again at some point! Hideo's great; a lot like a nagging parent who is a pain to live with, but really hard to live without.

keep hideo alive

awsome work, just surprised that u havent updated in awhile, i hope u continue this stoy and see it through to the finish.

I like Hideo. I think it is funny when he is being a matchmaker between Naruto and Tayuya. Thanks for your work.

Brilliant.

Perfeclty placed OC, which by the way is awesome in my eyes, and overall nicely written.

I read in your profile that you don't know if this fic will be updated again... I wish you'll find the inspiration back to continue this because it would be a waste to abandon such a piece of art. Well that and the fact that I love NaruTayu but there are few good fics like this one...

funny thing about bring hydrogen and oxygen together. it takes an explosive reaction to make water.

Gah i don't know if its the OC worming his way into everything, or how tayuya and naruto become friends almost instantly despite tayuya bashing the crap out of poor naruto, or if its the way naruto and tayuya and somehow almost equal in strength even though theres no way thats possible, but this story really really irritates me.