I would like it continued but I guess as it has been a while I'm in a minority

Please update

An excellent start to an intriguing story. I hope inspiration strikes and you finish this someday. Thanks for sharing what you have.

Very interesting and different.

This... is interesting in a weird way.

Very interesting idea. It seems very realistic though the old English is more difficult for me to read.

Looking forward for more. Well done!

Hamilton,

Thank you for the fun story "Concience of the Snake". Will you please continue the story, it looks like you've an interesting idea.

Cheers,

Peimann

Oh that's rich! Criticism of the Dursley on a new level

I love this story!~!

(*_*)

i was all exited about the story, and then you had to go and change it.

This story is really good. I hope you write more soon!

Thanks for the good news,

This seems like a great story. I like the way you are doing the time travel concept.

I would offer to take over your story, but I have too many of my own that I'm behind on, I don't think I would ever finish your story...

Good luck on your surgery and I hope you hit that home run.

i just wanted to say that this is a great story. i hope that you get to see both your daughters graduate and have a chance to spoil your grandchildren rotten, as all grandparents ought. i wish you the best of health on your surgery. good luck and godspeed.