*Shivers* morbid, but very well written, good job!

Wow. Thank you for an excellent vignette. Maria is such an enigma, and I love authors who write about her relationship with Cross. Though I'm usually not a Cloud/Cross shipper, the way that you paralleled the two women, and the ambiguity with which his feelings could apply to either is a marvelous way to write it. Bravo.

Well I don't know anything about D. Gray-man except what I have heard from you, but when you told me about this I was so intrigued that of course I had to read it. I didn't even need to know anything more. It's such a tight, elegantly-crafted bit of prose that it could almost stand by itself.

It is also WARPED, and I loved it. :D You are awesome.

I always did wonder why Maria had that ribbon around her whole head . . .

Ah, WOW. I got the end of that and said to myself 'OMG, did I just read that right?' and then I shivered.

And then I read it again _

Fantastic job! It's not that creepy to me, somehow. I really like it. And nice repetition/parallelism with 'he loves her.' :D

~Niamh

Delightfully unnerving and beautifully morbid in the best way. I'm not normally a fan of Cross/Cloud, but I am a fan of Cross/Maria, and you definitely made my day with this. Kudos.

Exquisite and creepy. Yes, the subject matter is disturbing in the extreme, but the way you handled it makes it a well-crafted bit of horror rather than just shock-fic. Nicely done.

It makes so much sense. I always wondered why Maria didn't have hair! Heh. Reading something like this should be disgusting, but you wrote it so well - I enjoyed it alot, and hope we get more!

so like cros hard cold yet lovable lol hurry and write more stories!

Wow, that was amazing! I was completely hooked from beginning to end. I can't even begin to list everything that I like, I'm still in complete awe.