that was sweet :) in character though if uve seen camp rock 2 final jam u'll know that shes not very confident ;)

the story is romantic . i give it * out of 5 . go SMITCHIE !

excellent lots of emotions and all i liked shane here.

lovedovepup with love

That had such emotion...-tear-

That was terrific! I loved the part where Shane was like, "And lots of other adjectives." This is kind of late, since it's November and this was published in January, but I like reading the old fics, because most of them are marvelous, like this one!

AWESOME ending! cutecutecutecutecutecutecute :P

sorry

I loved this line:

Silence. Silence with Shane Gray. Jeez, jut adding his name made the whole silence thing sound so much cooler and suave.

I laughed at it!

You write Shane as so sweet! :)

Kelly

Awe, it's so cute! hehe sorry, I love the whole just being yourself thing about it. hehe

Arya

Ok.. I loved it for 3 reasons;

1. It fits in with their charaters

2. I can see this actually in the movie.

3. I love this line; and tons of other adjectives...”

I thought it was cute! Not just like one part of it but the entire thing. Then again I think the sound soda makes when it's all fizzy is cute so yea..

That was so sweet!

Wow.

That was cool.

He made her feel special :D

lovely.

I can't say cute? Damn, I just said it. So, I really liked this story because you can know what she's thinking and all that, when in the movie you can only guess what the characters think. And it has Shane, so it's a great story just for that :P Kidding.

I also love the way you write ) Keep the good work.

How much was on Wikipedia about Camp Rock when you wrote the story? I figure it'd be pointless to go look now, because the movie already came out. Oh, well. Whatever. I like the story, it just feels weird because it doesn't fit that well with the plot, considering Shane thought that Mitchie was rich and all that.

That was so cute!

...

I'm not getting away with just that, right? Darn. xD

I loved how you really showed her emotions and thoughts; I personally think she would feel that way, but then Shane can always set her right. Now, I thought THAT was cute; telling her she was beautiful and that with her he can be himself. Great job! :)

Peace Love,

Angelica :D