One minor bone to pick: it's pitch black at 5 AM? Not in Surrey in July it isn't - 5 AM this time of year is sunrise. You want Harry to have pitch black, he'd better set his alarm for 4.

This story is perfect! I think it deserves more popularity than it is now! Character shaping is really good, it's almost like watching the original story, even better. I like every vivid soul under your pen, the appearance of pain and war. Thank you for writing such a great story, I will always love it.

Uhh Can you please remove the underlining? It gives a tiny headache. Story going good tho ig.

Joe, I'm truly starting to think you're better than JKR herself.

Wow. Just wow.

By far the best fanfic I ever read

Great, action packed story with lots of emotional impact especially towards the end. I don't really have anything negative to say about it. You seem a likely prospect, so I would like to discuss something with you.

Currently I am in the stages of creating an original character who I hope to have integrated into the fandom as you have done successfully with Ethan Wrafe before. I plan for him to be named Sir Dedrick the Cool. You’re probably too observant for me to need to say this, but that’s also my username on this site currently. I am in the planning stages, and Sir Dedrick is just a collection of thoughts on pieces of paper at the moment. But I’m not discouraged. Even Harry Potter started like that. What I would like for you to do is to take a look at my Dedrick notes and tell me what you, as the mind behind Wrafe, think of it. I would also like it if you get back to me on the story in which I plan to introduce Sir Dedrick to the fandom proper.

Meanwhile, I am your biggest fan, cliché as it sounds, and this story has been an inspiration for me in stretching my ambitions past oneshots and low key stories. Any reply, even one in which you tell me no in a firm manner, will be appreciated. Any corespondense would be so good, so good, so good, much like this story I have only partially succeeded in reviewing right here!

Oh that's cruel, why write in a dog just to kill it off? I mean at least it did the job of making me care about privet drive exploding... that and Harry's photo album

It's kind of funny. You're already wrong in your first few paragraphs when talking about good and evil in regards to the Crusades. The Crusades were a result of Muslim expansionism prior to the first crusader where they raped and pillaged their way across the middle east and even into southern and eastern parts of Europe. They destroyed Christian kingdoms that were already established in the Middle East and other places. The Crusades were a response to the heinous crimes that Muslims did in their initial assaults on christendom.
But yes, there were atrocities committed by both sides during the Crusades that were completely abhorrent.

I'd encourage all of you to look up the true history of The Crusades and not the crap they feed you in school.

Oh good lord. I mistakenly took this story seriously, when in actuality it's a comedy!

Apparently this is the world where everyone takes everything their told as completely real. House blows up,... EVERYONE IS DEAD! We have no bodies and we can't identify them,... but they're dead!
Oh god Dumbolddoor, I got there and the house was explodededed. They're dead!
Oh gee willickers Remus, He beat me! They're deadadadad and I'm old, but DEAD!

Jesus,... was this meant to be taken seriously? It's so poorly written. No point me spell was used? What about using post to see if the owl takes the letter? What about Gringotts and their policy on the dead?

So many plot holes, so little time. And we're only on chapter 2 boys and girls!

I also forgot to add,... the "intro quotes" are so ungodly pretentious. It feels like in the song quotes you didn't even try,... and just went "You know what. I like this song/quote/poem/saying,... I'm going to quote it!"

Okay,... so I see this story around a lot as a great read. So,... I got suckered into reading it.

Holy crap,... I've never thought I'd ever say this.

But did you buy your reviews? This story is BAD,... Not only just bad,... but it's so poorly written and tries so hard to be something great. I implore you to release your hold on the reviewers and get some HONEST reviews.

sorry, i've found a plot hole.
didn't the sword obsorve the basalisk venum?

awesome

I enjoyed this story for the most part but the last few chapters kind of fell off a fair bit