Reviews for Saved by the Bell
Wildprincess chapter 2 . 10/31/2019
Super cute chapter. I like it that Yuuno and Hayate seemed to have something good going onx
pokemon-35055 chapter 20 . 7/23/2019
great work
valguienmas chapter 8 . 6/29/2018
Ok... As someone with some tattoos, I have to said this: you don't tattoo someone unconscious! The needle could hurt the skin if the person in question doesn't point out the pain.

Also, Japan plus tattoo is a big no. Specially from someone wanting to sell something. Is a social stigma, so that event is very much impossible in real life. So it brakes the illusion, that and the constant use of bucks and dollars instead of yens.

All of that is nipicking, so will keep reading.
Truffalot chapter 13 . 4/5/2018
I wouldn't have been surprised if she did do it for the commercial, considering how easily your Nanoha falls for peer pressure
Truffalot chapter 10 . 4/4/2018
I don't think Nanoha is dumb enough to start smoking off that...
Truffalot chapter 7 . 4/3/2018
hnnnnnng
bubble.duckie chapter 20 . 10/10/2017
Wow!ts the need but I'm so happy with the story!
bubble.duckie chapter 19 . 10/10/2017
Aww these two have come a long way (no pun intended) I'm happy that things worked out well for them.
bubble.duckie chapter 17 . 10/10/2017
Quitting smioking is hard. I can imagine Nanoha going through the usual withdrawal symptoms. I just hope she can do it!
bubble.duckie chapter 15 . 10/10/2017
Love this super sweet and fluffy chapter!
bubble.duckie chapter 13 . 10/10/2017
Fate you better spank Nanoha. Is she being pressured into smoking? Oh my! I used to smoke and believe me that it was so hard quitting it!

Also, I really really love Precia in this story.

Oh gosh! Nanoha has become a secretive person now even to Fate. But but, pole dancing oh wow! I've always wanted to try that myself. Who run the world? Bad girls like Nanoha! Does Fate approve of her smoking? I'm pretty sure when she kiss Nanoha that she will smell it on her
bubble.duckie chapter 12 . 10/9/2017
I can totally imagine Fate dancing. I want her to dance hip hop and jazz. That must really be something.
bubble.duckie chapter 11 . 10/9/2017
Leave it to Arisa to be the voice of reason in this chapter. Thanks for knocking some sense into Nanoha. I guess since this is an old post, I can no longer find Mercurian Angels post on Fate's suit. Too bad.
bubble.duckie chapter 10 . 10/9/2017
You are so screwed Nanoha. Better come clean or else you will be grounded till your 30.
bubble.duckie chapter 9 . 10/9/2017
That's quite an embarrassing dare. Sorta like doing body shots at a club only this time she knows the person. Me likey!
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