This is fabulous. It so accurately portrays the relationship between the bothers AND the Colonel.

I absolutely love this C':

Alphonse is so much the big brother xD

This was awesome!

This made my day. With all that Ed does to protect Al, sometimes it's easy to forget that Al actually can overpower his older brother nearly effortlessly. I think some of my favorite images in the manga are when Al restrains him, though.

Awesome. I liked how you ended the story. It had a real fealing of finality. Also, why HASN'T Al locked Ed in his armor in the past? It seems like a perfect solution and kudos to you for thinking of it. Ed is high maintenance and it is amazing that Al hasn't gotten tired of dealing with him yet. I love stories from Al's point of view. Keep up the good work! ]

I love Alphonse so much and you've captured him so well here! Everyone seems to forget that, not only is Al as strong as his brother, he also has a lot more sense than him!

This is the perfect example of one of those rare moments when Ed depends on his little brother, even if he doesn't say it outright.

Wonderful! Really quite clever of Al there; somehow I think Ed never thought of it either, lol.

That was so cute. _ My favorite part was when Al locked Ed inside himself. That's pure genius! It would totally make sense. Al's done it with other people (at least two in the manga) so why not a noisy brother? :)

that was really sweet. _ i love how Al always seems to be the more sensible of the two, and even Ed needs to be taken care of sometimes.

i love the piggyback bit, it reminds me of that one shot of them in the UNDO opening. _ ALWAYS loved that.

I really liked this fic! Ed does make rash decisions sometimes...a lot of times...Al should probably try stopping him more often.

It's brilliant! A new take on an old theme. Nice Job. I like the fact that Al has a backbone, but is still him and the mission with the colonel is just like him.

Aw, good insight into Al.

that was sweet! i loved it! and my friend read it and loved it too. it was funny! good job!