I'm going to stopping here. There are a lot of things which are just to convenient to making things work out for Natsuko, like the fact Bernard hates Frost because of her, and not because Frost is, you know, a jerk.

So... I guess I'll start off with the fact picking a Japanese name feels off. All of the references draw from real figures, so why not pick an actual summer mythological figure rather than making one up.

She's then described in finite detail.

I'm also concerned with the idea that seasonal mythological figures can't be together, but the fact she fell for Jack Frost before this despite the fact he's been a jerk.

this chapter was short

awesome.

This was such a cute story. I am a big Jack Frost fangirl and I am happy to see him get his own happily ever after. I love Natsuko-she is adorable, and I love how quick witted she is. Question, if Jack and Natsuko no longer have their powers, is Yukiko still blue or will she become human? Fantastic story

Is she pregnant?

Insults lead to passionate kissing(maybe I should try it in my own romantic endeavors, lol). Too funny and cute.

I really like this story. Your an awesome writer

Loving this story thus far. Keep up the great work. :)

Just read your story, very cute! Great job! :)

short or not, i like it!

That was definately interesting. You write really well. Nice job.

Oh man, the crap is gonna fly.

Yes! Finally! I've been waiting for that to happen. Love they way they argued their way into it. ;D

I LOVE IT!