:) that's is all I really have to say... :) and thank you for this beautiful piece of writing

This is pretty good, but in the UK we don't have high school. If it's the state sector you have primary school then secondary and in the private sector we have prep then senior.

Sirius and Cammie are falling for each other so hard, yet they deny it... The love is is in the air, I can sense it.

Wow! Nice movie! But I just can't help wishing u added a few chapters in their relationship.

P.S the name is real. Not just some fan thingy.

Sirius sounds like a stereotypical blonde. Dye?

So... I think this story has major potential, but the only reason I have to stop reading it is because I can't see JK Rowling's characters acting like that. For example, I think Sirius would actually care that he was going to be a dad. Also, Lily was always said to be the nicest person. I think she would at least be nice enough to say hi once in a while. James wouldn't be worried about talking to someone who was alone, and it was said in the books that he had a "big head." Sorry that I can't continue. Good luck in writing future stories!

I love this one!

Hey James is nicer then that! So I'd lily and Remus!

You said her birthday was on Decmber the FOURTH!

Promising start! At least you write well unlike so many other writers on this site. :)

Will be interesting to see what happens next. :)

That was low.

Is that the end?
It's really good

How disappointing...we don't even get the horny details.

realistic. Good Quidditch game. That was mean of her at the end, some people r slow emotional or sexual developers. Some people r uber-shy.

That was a damn good realistic handling of a very sensitive subject. And adding prematurity & death. That was a masterstroke that showed off ur talents. And showing Sirius' reaction. Day-amn!